Black Poetry : The Perfect Day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Aug 3, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Flow


    His perfect words
    Our perfect phrase
    This perfect love
    to last always

    Our perfect rhythm
    In perfect rhyme
    The perfect dance
    in perfect time

    That perfect voice
    Those perfect eyes
    The perfect fit
    The perfect size

    The perfect pair
    The perfect touch
    His perfect smile
    that means so much

    The perfect sun
    and perfect moon
    Our perfect day
    ended too soon...


    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ALYCE

    YO PERFECT FLOWZ
    YO PERFECT WAYZ
    SAVIOR DA DAYZ

    THEE PERFECT LOVE
    THEE PERFECT HUGZ
    THEE PERFECT QUEEN
    MOTHERLY SING

    PERFECTLY BEAUTIFUL
    PERFECTLY WRITTEN
    :heart: :kiss: :heart:
     
  3. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is

    perfection, Ms. A. Pure, perfection.

    T :heart:
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce....


    oooooo-weeee!!....

    this is a perfect-ly perfect flow!! :)

    i am lovin' it sister dear!!

    PerfectLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you know what i'm saying

    a perfect day always seems to short
    time flies when you having fun
    and this was a perfect rhyme

    DSSNY
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    completely flawless

    very thorough

    pd :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I thought i'll bring back

    a perfect display in a perfect way of sistah (A)
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and a very well, written flow...it is. i'm lovin' it, as always, alyce. continue to bless us with your wonderful scribes, as i continue to watch.
     
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    yes indeed Listerscribin i'm wit cha ........
     
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