Black Poetry : The Penis Wars: Poisonberry Root

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  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Penis Wars: Poisonberry Root

    He left
    His poison
    Inside my vagina
    Dried bark and branches
    Which bore no fruit
    And I can
    Still remember
    How the pus
    Lay festering
    Inside the hollows
    Of my fallopian tubes

    These final days
    The doctors
    And the nurses
    Are so nurturing
    Family members
    Still don't know
    What to do
    How to say
    They are so sorry
    I ate the berries

    Those poison berries
    That will kill me
    Once they begin
    To take root


    *Vagina Chronicles*

    Hunter
    All Rights Reserved
     
  2. alyce

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    this is so powerful, Hunter...the way you say it soooo efficiently, effectively, effortlessly.

    EXCELLENT

    a
     
  3. j'hiah

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    me and alyce are on the same page about this piece..
    a blend of poetry and issue. this was classic, pure platinum :wink:
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista-gurl~

    Ya' done dropped a **** bomb with this here prose!
    It's as tight as only Queen Hunter can make it!!

    One :heart: sis!
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are...

    ...killing me, sis, with these pieces! I'm, definitely, feelin' them chronicles, ma; keep it up...:jumping::hot:
     
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    reality bites...

    and this piece is definitely stinging the souls of those who've walked this road.

    THANKS FOR TEACHING US ABOUT LIFE AND THE AFTER EFFECTS OF OUR CHOICES, HUNTRESS.

    peace be unto you.
     
  7. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks family for feeling me on this one
    Your support for my Vaginal Flowz...has been
    greatly appreciated :)

    Only in the House Of Flowz...can I scribe about my
    *privates* and get away with it ;)

    *private-entrances*
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!

    This here piece has unforgettably taken root to me!
    Thanx for sharing this powerfully written piece.
    Jtyntl
     
  9. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am blown away but such a meaningful poem, you get's much respect and mad props fa this one!!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im just blown away...damm this is sad....its ai-told-u-so type of thing....NICE PIECE
     
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