Black Poetry : The Pen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Apr 16, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (from the quiet zone)

    As I slip in to a slow mode
    I come into the quiet flow

    The peace I seek lies within
    The hidden thoughts of my pen

    I caress my pen
    Like a lover
    Bringing out the fire in me
    Heating the passion of my sensuality
    Intensify the peak of my sexuality

    I embrace my pen
    Like a friend
    Whispering secrets
    Laughing freely
    Crying crazy
    Wild and free
    Throwing it into the wind
    Flowing with my pen friend

    My pen becomes a sword
    Raging a inferno
    Trying to keep a positive mind
    Scribing the injustice
    Of this trouble land
    Feeling the affects
    Roasting inside
    Whaling away
    No hold bars
    Putting to canvas
    Of our struggle
    As the wheels turn
    With A positive mind
    My pen catch the vibes

    My pen is now a child
    As it sings a lullaby
    Hugging the babies
    Telling a tales
    Creating laughter
    Tickling the belly
    Rainbow bright
    Bringing force a bright light

    The search for balance
    Observation of life
    The hope
    The faith that is needed
    Looking for more then a dream
    You know what I mean?

    To flow like a river
    to face the storm
    to welcome the sunrise
    of dawn
    to put to canvas
    my thoughts within
    to glow and flow
    with
    My Pen
    Never looking for the end
    but a start of a new
    beginning
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Bluewater

    This is tightttttttttttttttttttttttt....

    May I borrow your pen...cuz mine is ackin' up. :D


    :thanks: for sharing part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
  3. Obscure

    Obscure Active Member MEMBER

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    decent.
    nice subject. something different.
    good read.
    not too complex.
    got its point across to the reader.
    nothing really jumped out at me to quote or anything.
    nevertheless good job.

    WuN...
     
  4. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluwater I love your pen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    If only I were near I'd kiss it!

    Your flows are so amazing sister
    The message here is so reflective of a relationship between poet and pen.
    You did this my sister!!!!!
    Loving it completely


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    new start da pen in flow
    love this tyte write sistah
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi brother money you are so sweet of course anytime:) thank you so much for the love:heart:

    brother Obscure i am glad you read my flow,thank you so much for sharing your love:heart:

    brother twision you are so kind my dear poet brother:) thank you for the love:heart:

    hi brother Rich...you are always there with the love, and i do indeed trhank you so much for give me love:heart:

    thank you all so much for your love on this flow..it is a edit from the quiet flow.:thanks: once again for allllllllllllllll yaaaaaaaaaaa love:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think we all can appreciate this flow about the strong connection between a poet and his/her pen. I enjoyed this flow.
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue, I love the way you laid this down, sister, but hey, what else is new. :toast:
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue

    A really nice and smooth floE you got goin on here...Nice sister :wave:
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

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    tight
    very smooth scribe