Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Pen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Feb 14, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I slip in to a slow mode
    I come into the quiet zone

    The peace I seek lies within
    The hidden thoughts of my pen

    I caress my pen
    Like a lover
    Bringing out the fire in me
    Heating the passion of my sensuality
    Intensify the peak of my sexuality

    I embrace my pen
    Like a friend
    Whispering secrets
    Laughing freely
    Crying crazy
    Wild and free
    Throwing it into the wind
    Flowing with my pen friend

    My pen becomes a sword
    Raging a inferno
    Trying to keep a positive mind
    Scribing the injustice
    Of this trouble land
    Feeling the affects
    Roasting inside
    Whaling away
    No hold bars
    Putting to canvas
    Of our struggle
    As the wheels turn
    With A positive mind
    My pen catch the vibes

    My pen is now a child
    As it sings a lullaby
    Hugging the babies
    Telling a tales
    Creating laughing
    Tickling the tummy
    Rainbow bright
    Bringing force a bright light

    The search for balance
    Observation of life
    The hope
    The faith that is needed
    Looking for more then a dream
    You know what I mean

    Rest was slow
    in coming tonight
    So I had decided to write

    Now I am feeling sleepy now
    My pen has done its deed
    Setting it aside for awhile
    Now it is time to sleep
     
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    very nice
    indeed feelin this flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my how i was feeling u here
    my pen has loved me and i of it
    as it lay down to rest
    i surely caress it ......dis was deep and tyte
    i really was feeling all of it in my mental mind
    where it's now covered in thoughts
    flow on sistah once da pen wake up from it's rest !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so on point, simply capturing the feeling we poets get from mind to pen to paper, the feelings flowing out, and the need to express them. Deeply felt this scribe.
     
  5. Bluewater

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    hi angel..thank you for feeling me on this flow..just had to let it go:) thank you fro the love:heart:

    Hi Bro Rich...ah yes..as the pen do help ease the mental..and induce so much more..thank you brother for the love:heart:

    Hi sister watzinaname deep from the heart it is what we do..and a natural part of who we are..thank you so much for the love:heart:

    To the flow:toast: thank you family for the love:grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome we gotta touch pens again ya know
    i feel it
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes for sure :)
     
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    thanks for taking me on a journey with your pen. indeed it is a wonderful thing.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh thank:thanks: you so much for feeling the journey of The Pen:heart:
     
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    Enjoyed this flow on the "Human Pen"
    i can identify....Great Write