Black Poetry : The Pen talks......a BlackAngel Thang!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 5, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its time to break it all down….
    Bodies yearn
    And the hearts crave
    As we take this ride..
    Feel the pride as two become one
    Represent in this mental vision
    ……..of reality
    I feel the erotic desires
    Taste the pleasure
    Heaven is at our door
    It’s more then jumpin in the sheets
    Mental stimulation
    Conversation…..
    Perfection at its best
    No classification
    But satisfaction
    Can you hang
    Inside the walls of my kingdom
    If you can I will hand you the key
    Profound in the flow easy as it can be
    Feel the hearts beat…
    Boom!! Boom!!
    Like an electric rush I appear in a hush
    Unseen to the eye take the middle passage
    What a wonder

    Ok let me go further….
    Surprise !! Thought I was quiet…
    Never was shy
    But its time to talk….
    Mental stage
    Desires rage
    Unlock the cage
    Of mental sage
    Walk this passage
    It wont age just grow stronger
    No faze
    Inhale as I begin my poetic vision
    Exhale the power release
    Listen as the thunder roar and the sky begin to open
    Purple moon bright sun watch the starz dance
    Don’t be shock….
    Its time to talk..
    And let it roll
    Sittin on my throne
    Don’t try to play you get burnt every time
    Better then fine wine
    Wait I aint done yet
    Breathe my essence hear my pen soar
    I am on a full charge
    A rose in her prime
    Do the finger tip roll and tongue rock
    Unfolding the woman in me
    If you can
    See I told you once now I have to tell you twice
    Extreme I be
    The Queen
    The one who will lay it down every time
    No other like me….
    Loves compassionate tap
    Set the tone
    Bring it raw trading off for extreme
    See I am who I be
    Word play and string you along
    But then again if you don’t know I tell you
    BlackAngel you see
    Thas who I be…..
    Upon the starz I sit…..

    Don’t let the pen fool ya!!!

    (C) 2004
    freestyle extreme
     
  2. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your pen was doin' more than talkin' your pen was teachin' :teach: uplifting :angel1: and even makin a couple of us blush :blush:
    Now I have the opportunity to let you know that that flow was fire!!!!
    :uzi: :uzi: :uzi: :flamet: :flamet: :flamet: :flamet: :flamet:

    You have uplifted me with those words, and allowed me to hear your great voice!!! I respect and honor what you said and hope that more people will step up to the plate!!!

    ohhh....just too much FIRE!!!
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Woah Sis!
    You dropped this
    hardcore style!!!!
    You spew this out
    like hot burning fire!!!
    Your pen lives as the
    Angel takes flyte!!!!

    Tyte drop!!!
    Loving it!!!!
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True love captures the soul within, of two, a roll in the hay can be an added benefit, but never the main attraction, at least it shouldn't be. Truthful drop.
     
  5. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    drop it

    pens are so exquisite,
    that's why I call them Heaven
    listening...
    observing the way your colorful words
    painted your feelings.
    Sweetness teasing, titillating like a
    unseen finger
    Touch, tantalizes, beguiling siren, lure it on
    do u feel ...feel naked without your pen?

    I know the electricity of it's devotion
    Feel the hum of it, its hint of pleasure, and pleasures....to come!
    writing @
    speeds incomprehensible, I can feel ur paper's
    getting wetter and wetter and wetter
    Letters twist in cursive
    A thought bubble bursts
    Words release Verses
    Capture the urge to merge
    Into the sentences thirst is
    imprisoned for ages within your mind
    Penned on pages since the begginning of time

    great drop poet.....i see u have a pen thang too...lol...hookup :lol: :D
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o my u blew it up wit a flame flicker and bomb
    wow! dis was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
  7. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not you, too! I swear, you and $$RICH$$.. you'll gonna make my hard drive melt! :)
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nabraska..thank you glad you enjoyed and blush too...lol
    you be on fire ya self now...thanks for the love and support. :wink:

    PurpleMoons..aww thanks sis.. i like to light it up ya know.....thanks for the love and support happy you enjoyed it:) just think i wasnt gone post it...smh i know sis i know.... :spin:

    watzinaname......thanks for the love and support...happy you enjoyed

    THA HOOKUPMAN.... Words twist and da chain reaction
    Word play is my thang indeed..thanks for the flow nice drop in

    $$RICH$$..its been a min so i said what the hay..and work my magic pen :wink: happy you enjoyed it..yes i am blushing :lol:thanks for the loving support:kiss:

    toylin...:lol: naw say it aint so.....we both do what we can true to the gift like you are my sister...thanks for the love and support....:)

    thank you all fam!!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do yo thang sis...
    All eyes on you ^5
    Very nice...
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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