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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Apr 11, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    I pledge allegiance to myself
    If I can't be true to me all through the times
    And all the people
    That make us shine
    And love me
    And love you
    And know myself
    Then my life
    Is vain

    I pledge allegiance to the queens
    That rise up and live their dreams like true mothers
    whose fear don't conquer
    life's true lovers
    She is true
    She is blessed
    Mother to all
    She won't fall
    Not ever

    I pledge allegiance to the kings
    Who stand up and fight the battle so divine
    They are the lions
    Fierce but still kind
    He loves best
    He loves most
    Togerther
    We stand

    The taxers wanna tax
    The payers wanna pay
    The righteous wanna fight
    The scary wanna pray
    The wise they save themself
    The foolish trust in man
    And Me, Myself and I
    I just know we can

    Rise

    And be invincible
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a Very Hard Hitting Scribe Miss Lady
    Pledging Alleigance to The Glorification of our Knowledge and Perseverence
    To our Rise
    Great Great Great Scribe
    Back to Back Keep Comming Sis
    :read:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pledge on , pledge high and continue doing what u do here best
    flow on sis as i too pledge unto u sweetie.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pledging to be true to self and to your people, as you rise, you reach out and help another do the same. This was on point, poetess.
     
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    beautiful

    heres and idea between us take this beautiful poem and print it up and put it on every door step in america
    this poem is simply touching
    ands its fierce
    its about time people started expressing theirselves again

    ps take this poem and email it to every woman in america
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed this drop flo on my sista!