Black Poetry : The Pathetic Poetic Pretender

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Jun 24, 2004.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was blindsided by tis powerful piece of poetry....
    i will come back once i've gotten my senses in order
    dayum gurl...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    mean flow where did the love go !!
     
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    lol thank you brotha khasm or king khasm13 i should say lol :)

    aww rich lol now that where there is love there must also be balance...and to all those who pretend to be something they are not...those who use and abuse something that is a honest gift...that is who this is too...BECAUSE i have as much Love as i do for poetry for the poetic famlee...i am able to say what i say with a pure conscience and sincere heart. :grouphug:
     
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    yes you are pure at heart dear sister ...
    hi:wave: so glad to see you miss you sis
    i know how you are flowing ..
    and i felt myself caught in the mixed...
    lay it down, you are shooting from the hip :uzi:
    and rifle to the shoulder...
    love ya sis:)
    flow your flow
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    What I am getting from this is that poetry is not a popularity contest, it is an art? Am I reading you right? If so, I hear ya, sort of reminds me of my piece asking if there were any cliques in poetry. Hit me up with a response, and flow on.
     
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    Great Poem Triniti.

    Say all you POETIC PRETNEDERS, can YALL SAY BOO BOO. Cuz dat is what yall IS!!!

    And watz, I am feeling you on the cliques ma, I really am.

    Tight Tight Werk Triniti.

    *Snaps*
     
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    Bluewater sista lolol seriously this is NO shoot out LOL i promise...its just something to DEFEND the poetry that does the art well...I defend the heartfelt scribes and the TRUTH in tale...because these days the way entertainment has HYPED up supposed "poets" calling hyped up played up rappers "poets" smh people have tried to get manipulate it to where it is simplee popularity and money oriented I know you understand my sista which is why I :heart: ya so much :)

    Watz my sista my sista I LOVE YOU GURRLLL lol :grouphug: yes that is what I am saying...its about artform that is POETRY of course I know you know I know you know ;) yes it is VERY much like the concept in your poem :) :grouphug:

    Mani :lol: @ mani smh word lol Thank you mrMani...now then I WONDER...is your approval a good thing :lol: you know its all jokes and love my brotha :grouphug:
     
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    OH MY.......GIRL IM SPEECHLESS... you cam back with a :bomb: in your hands!!!!!! :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
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    Trinity, Trinity, Trinity....

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    You must play well with others. :coffee: Just kidding, that was so incredibly tight. A poet of your magnitude has every right to feel the way you do and you scribed it so well.
     
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