Black Poetry : The Passion-El Amor- Forever More

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Sep 13, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    El amor de un hombre Negro
    The love of a black man
    La pasión que sintió de usted guerrero
    The passion felted from you warrior

    You are the essence of me,
    Your kiss touché me
    So deeply. So very deep.

    The waves of the oceans,
    Reflects the ripples of my heart
    So openly, willingly

    You are the fire
    That warms the desire
    Enormously ...within me,
    So gently. Soothingly...tenderly

    Come here,
    Come here... into my arms

    Together we soar
    The depth of these un charter border
    Freely...unconditionally

    Stirring sensation
    The passionate vibration
    Enchantment…. surrounds me.

    As we climb even higher
    The flames of desire
    Empower…the moment
    Intensely

    As we slowly glide
    Towards the heaven
    of paradise.
    Feeling more alive
    Amongst the clouds
    You and I.

    It has me in tears
    This wonderful sensation
    This feeling of ...being starved.

    Forever hungry
    For you
    My Love


    Peace
     
  2. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 7, 2003
    Messages:
    165
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Professional voice talent
    Location:
    Dayton,OH
    Ratings:
    +0
    Emotions are alive in this piece.

    Good job.
     
  3. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2003
    Messages:
    351
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    yes, beautiful piece Bluewater!!
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    thank you :thanks: Quinessential1
    for feeling me on this your scribes also vibes emotionally for real :) thank you

    hi Sistah Suddenpassion :thanks: thank you my sistah your poems are a flow of beauty 2 my sistah :)

    Peace
     
  5. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    31
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    This piece flows from the heart and enlivens the senses,very bueatiful.
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,053
    Likes Received:
    13
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Teacher of English, Literature & Poetry
    Location:
    Baltimore, Md.
    Ratings:
    +15
    quiet serenity of emotions flowing across the cool blue waters....

    i enjoyed this read poet...

    one.
     
  7. Olorun1

    Olorun1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 21, 2003
    Messages:
    95
    Likes Received:
    2
    Location:
    NYC
    Ratings:
    +2
    Agua Azul [Blue Water]

    Que celos siente el cielo, con todo su poder de Supremo

    Si poder tocar tus bellas olas

    Que con ecos de lamentos y tristeza se comformaria con darte un beso

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------

    The Heavens in Jealous rage even with its Supreme might

    Unable to touch your gorgeous waves

    With echoes of sad laments

    Would find comfort in touching you with a kiss


    -------------------------------------------------------------------

    Bluewater sistah, you know how it is when poetic inspiration hits you. You have to capture the essence of the flowing thought. This poem did this to me. I hope I didn't lose much in the translation.

    PEACE
    :toast:
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
    ths is soooo beautiful.... i really enjoyed it...
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,752
    Likes Received:
    28
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Educational/Human Resources field
    Location:
    Chicago, IL
    Ratings:
    +28
    this piece is sooooo beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! i liked this ...got the spanish in the beginning...i though someone was gonna start playin "spanish guitar...
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    ahhhhhh! i feel da depth of emotions
    run in a beat of the river blue
    let it continue to run sweetly
     
Loading...