Black Poetry : The Pain Of Leaving You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jun 23, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To get through to you
    What is it I have to do
    Walk that certain sexy walk?
    Talk that perfect ghetto queen talk?
    Back in the day I remember it was enough...
    Me being sweet I never had to act tough
    Now I'm ready and willing to ride,
    But still it's not me in your arms tonight
    You see I was twisted, stuck, maybe even whipped
    You still couldn't see that as a woman I'm fully equipped
    Now I'm locked cause I'm carrying your child
    You say you're there, but every night you act too wild
    I'm trying to give up not give up on you and me
    But I wonder if it's really you in the future I'm seein
    After all the arguements and the nights alone
    I'm ready to make this house a home
    I promise from here on out I won't do no wrong
    ***** get it together, you got a family of your own
    Tired of all the drama you takin me through
    How much does it take to show I'm true as yo "blue"?

    When we first met you knew just what to do
    That's why back then it was all about you
    But as time went on things seem to change
    Everytime you f***ed up you just ran a lil game
    I was blind to it then, but it disgusts me now
    You coulda had the world, now I don't even wanna be down
    I can't sit up and lie, you're still on my mind
    But I no longer cry, cause that love I can't find
    It's amazing how things can change so fast
    You think I'm still locked, but you're ONLY my past
    Doomed to have you in the rest of my life
    But I'm glad that we split cause death is being your wife!
    On your way to the cage
    Living your life in a rage
    In the book of life you're still stuck on one page
    I was trying to help you start a new book
    But when faced with a happy home you didn't know what it took.
    Found the easy way out and just walked away
    You still pick arguements, even today!
    So from here on out it's all about me
    You had something good but you were too blind to see
    Now that my flow is coming to an end
    Can only be my babydaddy, can't even be friends
    I mean it this time, it's time to move on
    So I guess I'll holla....
    B**** N**** I'm gone!
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow! tell him like it is girl! u do what u gotta do to make yourself happy, go on with yo bad self lol
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte flow...sorry youre into that predictament...
    :wave: :wave: :wave:
    Welcome to Destees!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to open flowz i feel ya u know
    welcome from above i now bless u in love
    let it out , vent tell him da truth
    u flow keep on da roll welcome :) :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ****!! u go girl!!! lol....tyte piece..
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...I like this.
     
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    wow..this is nice..you never know what you miss until is gone..nice flow
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou everyone for the warm welcome and the loving feedback.
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maybe things'll get better... never know

    tyte piece!
     
  10. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah.......they did!!!!!!

    He changed his ways and now we're on the road to "I Do!" this was from almost 3 years ago. This is one of the pieces that made me realize how powerful words can be. Thanks for the feedback!
     
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