Black Poetry : The pace

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, May 25, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so many path
    yet only one road
    how can that be
    as we proceed
    to do the best for us
    the best for our seed
    we fight hard to succeed
    to achieve
    then face with
    grieve
    from the others greed
    (no matter the color)
    They watch us bleed
    baking in the sun
    until we’re raw
    we all walk at different pace
    yet the end we come to face
    because no matter what path we take
    the end of the road is the place
    so let's not waste
    our time with hate
    communicate
    embrace
    the pace
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I gotta agree with that...a thousand paths...ONE road. food for thought, I like where you took this...and I can say, I hear you.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed the cross road
    split as we journey on
    wit reasons as we learn
    yet bond in unity for
    the love of our community
    without greed but love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's wise to communicate, when we are able to, if not, at least we know we tried. This piece makes you think. nice flow.
     
  5. Nita

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    ^5

    @ sister Blue,
    Communication is the key.
    Wonderful message sister. :)
     
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    Truer words have yet to be uttered we need to concentrate and communicate. Thanks for bringing forth this for all to " hear" Love your flow.
     
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    Wonderful Peace Sister...
    Loving the vibe here...

    Embracing the Pace...
    Peace, Sage
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you, sister. It's all about U-N-I-T-Y. This is a blessed scribe. Peace.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Communication
    Unity
    yes indeed
    flow it sis....
    love ya
    Angel
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much
    queentswana:)
    $$RICH$$ :)
    watzinaname:)
    Nita:)
    thatgirl74:)
    angelicsage:)
    gempis:)
    mzblkangel:)

    for your love:heart: and thoughts on my flow :hearts2: and feeling
    the pace of the path we all do take

    Blue:heart:
     
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