Black Poetry : The Outer Limits

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The undisciplined western mind.
    Causing disease in our time.
    Warring worlds, :bazooka: code of the day.
    Truly archaic none survived.
    Trying hard to colonize worlds.
    Galaxies far beyond our civil world.

    Artificial intelligence taking over.
    Men of little moral cover.
    Telling us they are our brothers.
    Gone are days of making peace.

    Rampart killing in the streets.
    Blood let, carnage is the norm.
    Sound all war, ring the alarm.

    Reference times when peace was emanate.
    Since the beginning of time.

    Yet we haven’t solved the problem of causing
    each other humanity harm. :bawling:
    Playing conscience for the others.
    Selfish depth of wisdom true.

    Can’t be allowed to spread global domination.
    No where to run and hide from you.

    Propelled by deadly force is man.
    Weapons of mass destruction. :eek:
    Turn away from repercussions last.

    It’s part of human nature to be destructive.
    Species gone from ocean floor.
    Only fragments left for learning.
    What are we fighting for?

    Flag allegiance.
    Cause were told to do as told.
    Die for exhalative selfish needs.
    Is it for the control of others, to
    tell them how to work and breed?

    Check mate. :confused:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    checkmate indeed dis was str8 off da hook
     
  3. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    "yet we haven't solved the problem of causing each other humanity harm"

    that line really struck me...the outer limits shooting right into the center of our beings...very nice
     
  4. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $$RICH$$. I don't play chess but in any game. Knowning the moves does bring success.

    Deepy I often have to check and see valence ring. I'm circling on. Truth and what we want to obtain is always in the middle. Levels below us. Many think it is above. It's like everything in this country. It has been laid out before us already. Were skirting the outer edges. Some are knocked out becoming free radicals. Action, being bumped by another brings about change and levels. Positive collision is what we have to focus on. Energy flows negative to positive. Without ground nothing flows.

    Then we shoot from " the outer limits shooting right into the center of our beings "
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In war, is there really a winner, after so much death and destruction? Human life is often just not valued at all. Intense scribe Hodee, for sure.
     
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    Whoa, brothah, this is raw and real. Straight up dope.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    checkmate!!!!! tight andall on point
    flow it Hodee...enjoyed this one

    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee...

    this was absolutely incredible...
    I was engrained in every stanza
    this was a very compelling
    piece that truly summarized
    our state of affairs...

    Thanks for sharing this with us!
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Teach Brother Hodee. Every day more truths are exposed. Great write
     
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