Black Poetry : the other...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissPoetik, Mar 21, 2003.

  1. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every night after I love my man
    I willingly let him go
    And I try the very best that I can
    To be strong when I’m alone

    Before he goes he’ll kiss my belly and say
    “Take care of my first little seed.”
    I just smile and whisper “okay.”
    And then I let him be

    I don’t worry about the other chick
    I know that I come first
    The only thing that makes me sick
    Is that this household he has cursed

    She is the one with solid detest
    For what he does for me
    I find it strange that she gets stressed
    And filled with jealousy

    Religiously I pray
    For him to return to me unharmed
    As I wish for him to stay
    Between the safety of my arms

    I don’t mind the fact that he cheats
    Because he’s taking care of home
    The other woman is the “streets
    And freely I let him roam…
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Intriguing...

    Is this truthfully how you feel?

    "I don’t mind the fact that he cheats
    Because he’s taking care of home
    The other woman is the “streets”
    And freely I let him roam…"

    Honestly?
    Reas
     
  3. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl i wish i can think like u, but on the other hand u must really love him .
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep piece!


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
  5. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's amazing what one can hear
    when that take the time
    to lend the other side of the game
    their listening ear

    My heart goes out to you and yours
    as yall grind to make ends meet
    may Good richly bless your love your seed
    and provide relief from the streets

    NittyGritt ReddClay
     
  6. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...

    thanks ya'll. i have been in this situation before and that's when i wrote this...