Black Poetry : The Other Side Of Two Minutes (inspired by a piece by shaz)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We conversate in full thought
    slow paced set to a metronome
    of wax running down a candlestick
    we think before we speak even if
    it's two words cause we know that
    every words count so why rush
    when we have all night?

    Foreplay is the calm before the
    storm so let's let our tongues chase each
    other on the plains of love falling
    in and out of the valleys of our contours
    leaving trails of moisture for
    us to follow and to return to shake hands with
    the reflections of one another on
    our eyes

    Let's let our fingertips play tag and
    laugh and scream excretory excitement
    as you lubricate "her" and and my mouth
    waters in anticipation of kissing "she"

    Let me blow breezes of "what is to come"
    along your forest to stoke the fires that are
    to come ... I want to get lost amongst your
    sexual trees' epiphanies and etch my name
    on the bark of your rapid access memory
    so you can pull me up when my visions slide /
    down your mental side and make "her"
    flinch

    Let's not sprint to the Oasis of Orgasms
    let's take our time and adore them from afar while
    on our journey to reach them / let my hips
    puzzmatically connect with the interior
    of your thighs as their sighs dance on the
    scent of cinnamon that emits from
    love's eye /

    place your voice in honey(suck)led time and
    count backwards from ten / sound travels slowly in the

    chambers of bliss / the number "one" will be spun
    into silk memories of eight orgasms that lay themselves
    across your body / that still shakes / not from
    two minutes of flash instant D.I.C.K lashing
    but burying moans in a row in the fields
    of your fantasies........and that

    takes time when your on the other side of
    two minutes.


    (c)2001 blakverb "off da top thinkin"
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take your tyme!

    You really move me black! I can tell a great poet when I hear one. Ha ha ha ha,Wow,take me back! mmm,mmm,mmmm,wheuuf!
    That piece was hot! Right on the ace!
    Desert Storm
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB.....

    dayum baby!!... the other side of 2 minutes??

    what about the otha side of eternity... or the
    otha side of Always&Foreva... cum wit me? please? :D

    your off da top... well you know what i think!

    OneLuv...
    SunShyne~
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the private....

    ............read.......!!
    :kiss: :kiss:

    Enuf said!!
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmm...

    i like those theah thought...
    -7
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spell it out bro
    Spell it out
    tight peice poet
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***breathing heavy***

    whew...man i'm glad you posted this. it was HARD for me to tell them about our side of it...

    tight scribe poet
     
  8. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i....uh.....

    i....um....need a minit to gather my self together.....


    dayum....



    i can't even think
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dnommo, you feel me bro! two minutes? C'mon...So yes I felt inclined to expose our side.

    GA, yeah queen the other side of two minutes like that times 25 (and I'm being modest :rolling: ).

    StarGoddess (you still supreme to me) gather yourself but get ready for another ride.

    W7 and N2, queens with the capital preceding the number, I'm glad ya'll appreciated or should i dug the piece.

    Shaz thanks for the muse it is your piece that spawned this one.

    one love,blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAZZLING THOUGHTS OF THE OTHER SIDE
    HUMMMM!!
     
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