Black Short Stories : The Other Night - Part 3

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  1. MsInterpret

    MsInterpret Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please read The Other Night and The Other Night - Part 2

    Officer: Ma'am you're not going anywhere tonight

    Woman: Ths isn't real....

    Officer #2:
    THIS IS REAL!!! YOU....

    Officer: Hey! James...Let me handle this...Why don't you take a break?

    Officer #2:
    Yeah...okay.

    Woman:
    I'm so tired. This is some nightmare

    Officer: Unfortunately, it's not. Now, this what we've gathered so far.

    After finding your husband leaving the office with this woman, you drove home. When you arrived at the house you entered into the kitchen and grabbed a knife out of the drawer. Then you proceeded into your daughter's room and she must have woken up and you lunged at her as soon as she noticed you had a knife, but you cornered her in her room and stabbed her once in the arm and two times in her upper abdomen.
    Her screams must have woken your son who came into the room and noticed what was going on. There was a struggle between you and him, which explains why you have a black eye. But as your son ran out of the room you chased him into your bedroom and stabbed him in the back of the neck as he tried to get to the phone. Leaving the knife lodged in the back of neck and ultimately die.
    Soon after that your husband must of came home. He obviously had no clue as what to find in the house, because the whole ordeal with the children happened up stairs. So as soon as your husband came upstairs and into the bedroom and noticed your son on the floor, you had already managed to some how get downstairs and grab another knife. He must have turned and seen you standing there covered in blood...

    Woman: And he asked me what had happened.

    Officer:
    So you remember?

    Woman: I told him that it was his fault. That he had abandoned his family! He abandoned ME...

    Officer:
    Then you stabbed him.

    Woman: No...He stabbed himself...

    To be continued...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    He did what ????
    now me and the rest of the jury sitting in amazement , can't wait for more in pt.4
    we now wonder if she was sane or insane !
     
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    yummy story

    Im so waiting to hear what happens next. Please dont make us wait too long. LOL. i gotta see if the chick is crazy, or did someone REALLY kill her family.
     
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    welcome Vay2010 to destee.com short stories and tales of some talented
    brothers and sisters ,
    I too can't wait til pt.4
    I think she was crazy insane and mentally erupted but until i feel the effects of the next
    part i'm just guessing ......Hey sis break us off som'mo !
     
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    MsInterpret Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!!! I'm glad you are all getting into this...

    I apologize for not getting back to this story and leaving it in limbo...But I will continue real soon with chapter 4
     
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    looking forward to it !!!!
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    aaahhhgggghhhh.....im all invested in this MZ...let me buy the rights to this...we could make some doe


    I wanna play the defense attorney in the movie....Call SAG..im in there...LOL
     
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    Part 4 coming soon...Jan 5th 2011
     
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    And i'll be waiting
     
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