Black Poetry : the orange-ness...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Nov 8, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a balmy evening in september
    shivering from swimming without
    toweling off well
    hugging my knees
    sitting at the edge
    watching you in the water
    reminded of how much i love you
    the sun smoothly envelopes the moment
    the evening
    the mood
    the setting of it behind the hills
    at the far end of the lake
    coloring the clouds pink orange yellow
    painting the sky blue purple dark
    twilight stars
    you call to me
    to undress and join you
    as the sun prepares for bed...
    i smile my devilish grin and wade in
    leaving my clothes behind
    to swirl with you
    in the orangeness...
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this tastes so good poet!!! so very good!!
     
  3. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...

    you've painted such a wonderful portrait...

    i LOVE this!!
     
  4. elayne.

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    seven.


    see? there you go again!! painting pictures...
    ...beautiful erotic vivid & leaving me breathless.
    i was diggin' on this one. almost felt as if i was
    there!! thank you. ( btw... lovin' the title!)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: WOW...

    indeed you did paint a wonderful portrait

    great work
     
  6. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks y'all... this is my way of painting and i luuuv to paint! :D :spinstar:
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To think I was this close to missing this one
    You know I love this one
    Wadin in the pool buck necked all pretty and ****
    Got me all smiling just thinking bout it
    (sorry my bad got a little carried away)
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: you are funny!!!
    maybe it's a bad thing that you know me. :lol: :spinstar:
     
  9. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Visual. Vivid - I'd love to see some of your artwork, but reading it is cool. --- I enjoyed this one for real !
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In agreement with the poets before me...
    Beautiful portrait!


    Coco :heart:
     
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