Black Poetry : THE OPPORTUNITY OF YOU

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Aug 25, 2006.

  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading while it was posted
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey there sweettee:
    I really enjoyed this piece.
    Very nice indeed

    Much luv sista
     
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    this was a interesting piece
    of love and attraction
    and emotions wrapped into one piece
    nice drop
    7/10
    uno
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u did it again, i was right there too on the other side of the room
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That meeting was beyond, meant to be, it was heavensent. I loved every bit of this. First being taken into your train of thoughts, and then, drawn into the blissful chance meeting and lovely interlude. This was very romantic.
     
  6. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankyou for all the love and support family glad you enjoyed this little piece of me

    sweettee29, love
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think I need to put you on my street light list... lol.. this was a naughty.. nice.. drop... i loved it... flow on sis...
     
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    I like the unexpected rhythm
    and the occasional rhyme
    that brought it all back together
    made me think of jazz
    soothing and exciting all at the same time
    you have a nice selection of vocabulary in this piece
    such as "endentation"...very nice, I like the uncommon flow

    loved this verse...it fell like a waterfall from your pen

    write on poet...1
     
  9. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SOFTLY THANK YOU, I'M ON THE LIST GIRL! TSK TSK TSK
    AND ANGELIC SAGE THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORT I AM GLAD YOU LIKED THIS PIECE

    SWEETTEE29, LOVE
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats what I'm talking about a poet that knows how to use line breaks. Plus the poem keeps you interested and wanting more. Just dope. Big ups Poet.

    Mannie
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