Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Aug 25, 2006.
thanks for reading while it was posted
hey there sweettee:
I really enjoyed this piece.
Very nice indeed
Much luv sista
this was a interesting piece
of love and attraction
and emotions wrapped into one piece
u did it again, i was right there too on the other side of the room
That meeting was beyond, meant to be, it was heavensent. I loved every bit of this. First being taken into your train of thoughts, and then, drawn into the blissful chance meeting and lovely interlude. This was very romantic.
thankyou for all the love and support family glad you enjoyed this little piece of me
I think I need to put you on my street light list... lol.. this was a naughty.. nice.. drop... i loved it... flow on sis...
I like the unexpected rhythm
and the occasional rhyme
that brought it all back together
made me think of jazz
soothing and exciting all at the same time
you have a nice selection of vocabulary in this piece
such as "endentation"...very nice, I like the uncommon flow
loved this verse...it fell like a waterfall from your pen
write on poet...1
SOFTLY THANK YOU, I'M ON THE LIST GIRL! TSK TSK TSK
AND ANGELIC SAGE THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORT I AM GLAD YOU LIKED THIS PIECE
Thats what I'm talking about a poet that knows how to use line breaks. Plus the poem keeps you interested and wanting more. Just dope. Big ups Poet.
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