Black Poetry : The Open Invitation... The RSVP...

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  1. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (A Maple And Bishop Collaboration)

    You, kind sir,
    are, cordially, invited
    to attend
    a, maply xtracted, body shower.
    While, aphrodisiacal, refreshments
    are, first, prepared;
    then set up by six (sharp),
    you'll be expected
    between ten, to fifteen, past the hour.
    Within forty-five,
    I'll-most likely-be under the assumption
    you've had your 'fill,'
    as you will have 'eaten,' quite, a bit.
    Meanwhile, I'll have, strenuously,
    worked up an appetite,
    as your 'eating' habits will, undoubtedly,
    drive me into an, orgasmic, fit.
    Post refreshments
    we will, then, retreat into the bedroom
    for the exploration
    of 69, paradisiacal, methods
    of digestion.
    Come prepared to reach ecstasy,
    at that, alarming, extremity:
    stamped triple X
    and recommending viewer discretion.
    At this point,
    we will drift in, and out, of slumber;
    relieved and, undeniably, spent.
    Though, to successfully conclude the evening,
    we will, first,
    need to repent.
    Of course,
    by way of the main event.
    RSVP...



    I accept
    For the invitation extended
    A, maple xtracted, body shower
    Sounds appealing
    And stimulating
    As for refreshments
    You can expect me at thirty minutes
    Before the hour of six
    Oh by the way
    Never assume….
    I am never filled
    Although I will give
    You the opportunity
    Of working
    Off your appetite
    For as you said my skills
    Have left you in a fit
    But allow
    Me
    To make one slight change
    Instead of the bedroom
    I’ll be in the mood for a shower
    Don’t worry I will come prepared
    For I am the Master of Extasy
    You see as an invited guest
    I must bring you a gift
    But be warned
    The gift I give can be habit forming
    No need for viewer discretion
    Because this erection
    Shall be hid in the cavern
    Deep below
    while a soapy lather cover
    those lucious melons
    that serves as a side dish
    as my hands caresses them testing the firmness
    and my tongue plays softly nibbles them as I sample
    the sweet taste
    As far as repentance
    With every exploratory probe
    I shall always be sorry
    That I didn’t accept this invitation sooner.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple & Bishop...

    ummm... well... i'm just not really
    sure where to begin... (LOL)...

    i'll just leave you with my
    famous-passed-on-from-my-brother
    words that especially apply to
    pieces such as these....

    DAYUMMM... SEXTRA TYGHT!! :lol:

    OneLuv...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!!!!

    Maple and Bish,

    I'm into the dinner for two thang but...ya shoulda made this a dinner "party"!!! LOL!!!

    Nonetheless, go on and get ya RSVP swerve on!!!!

    I ain't mad at ya!!!

    Well done poetess & poet!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yall bout to get muh pressure up

    I cant take dis kinda **** unwarned...lol yall cats are too da extreme!!! maple you know im waiting to be :maply extracted: of course...lol

    Nuthin but love
    Reas
     
  5. Watcher

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    Be careful you two...I'm watching the whole scene from the Watchtower in the sky...
     
  6. alyce

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    I have to say

    this went down nice n ezeeee!! (Reason, THAT was so vivid ~ maply Xtracted, of course)!

    Go head y'all!

    A
     
  7. dnommo

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    HEY Y'ALL GET A ROOM

    just kidding... maply i could say a lot but when the words ooze form the sweetness of your pen coupled by the colab from the bishop, well, all i can say is:

    :hot: COULD SOMEBODY PASS ME SUM WATA'!!!!! :jumping:

    ***standing ovation***
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

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    I'm tellin my momma *wink, wink*. Well done. This had enough heat to almost melt my PC.


    One
     
  9. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *Feelin' the love*

    My sis, you know I am just honored to be in the midst of your shyne (gotta rock the :shades: cause you are, just, too bright, mama). Did you know ya sistah is one of your biggest fans? Thanx for show of support. And it was such an honor- to say the least- to work with the Bishop, himself...
    GQ- My favoritest flirt, a dinner part, huh? You are too much. Thanx for the read, flirt :D *taking it all in*.
    Reas- Now you know; I can't tell you enough, how much respect I have for you. You keep me on my toes, pa...
    Watcher- I hope you don't mind that I had to 'borrow' your brother for a minute :laugh:. Thanx for the read. I can't explain what an honor it was to collaborate with him...
    Ms. Alyce- A, true poetess, amongst poetesses. I am humbled by your words of encouragement. You'll never know...
    D- lol, get a room? You are too much, poet. Thanx for the read; *handing you that glass of water*.
    UbZoRbShUn- Don't tell-mama might curse me out :nono:-; imma be good! :laugh: Thanx for the read, poetess. *Sippin' on some of that green tea*
     
  10. baller

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    back in the day when i was....

    ...let me check my pace maker to make sure my heart is still beating.:) DAYUM. got me sweat'n just reading this.

    KEEP IT HOT.

    peace.
     
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