Black Poetry : The One

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by icandi, Sep 4, 2002.

  1. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are sweet and sensative
    always looking at the good and not the bad
    you talk with a language that only i can understand
    you are a girls dream
    the ideal boy next door
    you are a nice guy
    a hot boy
    fine yes fine and irresistable
    the perfect match
    listen to me as i uncover the mystery of what you mean to me
    I crave you like chocolate even though its the last thing i need
    your touch is like music from the ocean and the seas
    your eyes are like clouds soft and sweet
    you have skin soft as rain and a smile that out shines the sun
    and all of my dreams reveil to me that you are The One.
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    icandi.


    ...i likes dis!! :D

    "I crave you like chocolate even though its the last thing i need
    your touch is like music from the ocean and the seas"


    sho ya right!! thanks for sharing. :)

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
  3. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, i have met the One and sweet it is u said it beatifully
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love it!

    Reas
     
  5. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) tyte poem
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmm
    this is so so nice
    loving this flow
    Peace
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mutual Admiration Society

    Icandi, I like what I see of you! :x:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight poem here...
    work it...
     
  10. deep_cognition

    deep_cognition New Member MEMBER

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    Wuz up? I'm feelin it Icandi.