Black Poetry : THE ONE....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Jun 27, 2006.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like this always happens to me .
    Wanting a man that I cannot have or loving a man that is not worthy of me.
    Am I doing something wrong, or is it that they cannot see
    the beautiful, strong, loving, independent woman in me
    I am not perfect, I have never claimed to be
    I just want to be happy, loved, respected and complete
    So what’s the problem with these brothas I meet
    Their actions never justify their words
    and that **** just gets on my nerves
    Don’t say it if you don’t mean it
    They never think that this sista may be real & true
    She’s not just feeding me BS like some sistas do

    I am every woman, you see
    I pride myself in satisfying my man’s every need
    I posses all those important qualities
    I cook, I clean, I do the laundry. Make the house a home
    A place he looks forward to be
    We can kick it and chill and have a good time
    But I also take care of business, so that everything stays in line
    There is no place that you will ever take me
    that I will not fit in with the company
    Formal affairs, after work social, you can’t miss me

    When it comes to the lovin’ No one can compete
    Cuz I'm the definition of sensuous, sexy, erotic, and freaky
    I can love you slow and passionately or ride it rough and fast
    Bring you to your knees
    My mission is to please

    So can you tell me what’s the deal with these brothas I meet
    Do they really know what they want or are they just afraid of me
    I’m not looking for a sponsor to fund my life
    I just want one man, one lover, one partner, a friend
    To share my life
    Until he comes I won’t strife I’m going to chill
    And enjoy the ride because I will meet him
    And he and I both will know he is
    THE ONE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U don't have to look real far , i'm sure he's near and know of your
    love , needs and wants ........i hear ya
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell him 4EVER said come here. NOW!!!! lol:)
     
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    I feel you on this one.....

    Some Brothers are game players, some have lead in their shoes,
    Before I met my currrent, I was surely singing the blues,

    Not the silly blues that I "can't get a man"
    but blues of bad encounters; wanted to bury my face in the sand,

    Till one day I sat and thought to myself,
    why am I moping, I'm young, time to get up off the shelf,

    Yes I was the perfect "wifey" even paid some bills, a freak, clean and burn,
    still no act right: I figured now it's my turn,

    to get out and see the world................what it has to offer,
    come to find the world is bigger than mensesss, my heart became softer,

    I was no longer worried about measuring up to unrealistic standards,
    because when I aim to please ME, all other criticism went to the birds,

    decided to shake all the cheaters, boozers, and bootsy using losers,
    so if anything failed in the love arena, I could be my own accuser,

    Lo & behold, a German Chocolate Adonis was vying for my attention,
    *ahem* I raised my standards...it works like a charm, did I mention:?:,

    men consider that fierce, and see you as a go-getter,
    they either measure up or pass you by because they know you can get better,

    :lol:

    4EVERLUV, your name alone speaks volumes,
    if a man can't see your LOVE radiating....eff em'


    Let them stay S.O.S.,
    you deserve the best,


    Let love find you, sometimes it's lurking nearby,
    but you'll never realize it until you shake the no-good guy,


    your mind will be forever occupied with:"what's wrong with this dummy?",
    why they have bad intentions, and hold good women for hostage; is beyond me,


    I know you're probably thinking: "what does this young Sista know about love?",
    tell you the truth: little to nothing, just testifying...:grouphug:

    Keep the faith, surely your Ebony Prince will come along and woo you:hearts2:
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spicy that was awesome and I heard every word.
    I'm not trippn' I'm so in luv with me right now that I can't trip.
    Thank you for the flo....but your girl is good believe me.:)
    Much Luv to you
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many can relate to this I'm sure. The right one won't need you to perform magic tricks to get his attention, he'll know. Another smooth flow poet of the week, and I enjoyed spicy's flow as well.
     
  7. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you watz. It is always a pleasure for me when you come check out my flo.
    Much Luv Sista