Black Poetry : The One

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Luver2B, May 17, 2004.

  1. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    I gave birth to this poem a while back, so the name doesn't imply our friend in this community. That's just the title-

    The One

    When she looks at him with an inviting eye
    Do you think he will refrain from making her high
    You haven't held him in so long
    Your scent can be trace in no lung
    His faithfulness became a matter of option
    It was nothing more than your foul creation
    You left the man wanting, needing
    While you spent years career building
    With his reality twisted
    His memory depleted
    He just had to touch the one
    Who promised him she'd be the one
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flowing i felt dis one
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow, I likes this piece