Black Poetry : The One

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by illwillthakid, Nov 17, 2003.

  1. illwillthakid

    illwillthakid Member MEMBER

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    Dream Girl

    I love you

    And thats not just an understatement

    Im really in love with you

    And I cant even fake it

    You see, I 've never felt a love like this before

    And to tell you the truth, I want some more

    I love the way you hold me

    I love it when we kiss

    & I love the fact that you love me

    Really, it inspired me to write this

    I love the way you cause me to stumble when I speak

    & I love to let them cats know "yeah, she's with me"

    I'll fight any dude if he ever disrespect you

    & I dream every night of the day you say I do

    Cause when my days turn gloomy, you are my light boo

    See, I'm inspired by your beauty

    & intrigued by your intelligence

    The things that didn't matter before

    Now seem relevent

    I'm trapped between surreal fantasys

    & the harsh reality of the world

    But one things for sure

    You are my baby girl

    & I can't help but to think about you

    it's like your engraved in my brain

    My friends be laughing at me but I aint even ashamed

    But the one thing thats funny about this situation is . . .

    your not even real

    your just a figment of my imagination
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Then your fate is sealed
    Cause if you dream it
    It shall be...
    The heart is so inclined
    And baby,
    Got back enuff,
    To blow your lovin' mind!

    NICE
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin yo flow
    ....:angel1:
    i actually understand
    nice work poet
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed within ya own u have it
    nice scribe welcome to the house of love
     
  5. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea this be Ms Ghetto Poet and um really feelin ur rhymes. U have a nice flow, so dont stop writting! I love this one.........:kiss:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    digging this flow
    imagination is only a guide
    to what you looking for
    and what you will find
    nice vibe on this scribe
    Peace
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    work it out young Cali folk up in here :) doin the thang...she must be special to ya in your mind...that way when u meet...she'll be special in your heart :)
     
  8. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if I were ten years younger. . . you've got something here. Beautiful scribe brotha poet.