Black Poetry : The Night We Swam

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dolphins swim in my psyche
    Memories in motion
    Encircling the burning sun
    Hues of tantalizing orange and hot reds
    Dart the landscape of…. beautiful.
    Exotic and erotic war in my mind for supremacy
    As we swam that night.

    Dolphins swam
    As crescent moons became perfectly full
    Elongated appendages stretch into eternal bliss
    As pink Salmon swims my stream up
    Made the rigidity of me squirm
    As a worm desiring to be eaten
    Swallowed completely
    And repeatedly
    As we swam that night.

    Dolphins swam in circular undulations
    Emulations of orgasm
    Rippling to the surface of my granite gift
    Jism oozing into birth
    Impregnated by this Goddess
    Body-scaped in perfect balance
    Hued ebony reflecting the glimmer of stars
    Universal cries echo beauty, beauty, beauty

    Breasts nourished my aching soul
    As a new born babe, rooting on sight
    Firm and supple
    Giving meaning to memories
    Of luscious licking
    And yet the tongue knows only salivation
    And lips verbal reverberations of... beautiful..., beautiful..., beautiful
    Flawless navel centers my galaxy
    As stars engage in cosmic intercourse
    Unblemished thighs squeeze me tight
    Pulling in to the depths of her stream
    Screams of passion - Dreams
    As the natural elements melt into us
    And Dolphins swim in circular motions
    Undulations. Mental reverberations.
    And I awake to dream.


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  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so beautiful. i could get lost in the waves your swimming with your words around this piece. just beautiful.
     
  3. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thx Sista. 'Preciate the love - True!!!
     
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    ohhhhh man just swimin in that sea with you :)
    lovely my brotha and glad to see ya scribe back on the board :)
     
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    this was smooth.....I was pleasantly swept into the undertoe
    of your deeply, passionate....multi-dimensional flow....

    great read!
    peace
     
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    Aw I love rich imagery like this. And the flow in your swimmin....utterly beautiful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 tyte in da deep flow
    do it up and swim on !
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Triniti - thank for the love. i been down but not out.... i am still here...

    Angelicsage - thanks for feeling me... deeply... fo sho!

    Gempis - much love - feel dat - thanks so much.

    Sir Richness - peace to you bruh. thanks for the poetic knod!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was str8
    enjoyed the read....
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thx - mzblk.
     
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