Black Poetry : The Night of Memiories

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by EbonyQueen06, Jan 25, 2005.

  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You took me by surprise!
    I loved the way you started so gently
    And showed me something I didn't know about
    You worked my like a 9 to 5,
    Carressed me like a little baby,
    And loved my like a mother love a child
    From the soft sacharine kisses
    that caused me to flow like nector from a flower
    To the way you felt inside me
    Making me feel as if it was my 1st time
    You had me begging for more
    As went from the kitchen floor to the shower
    Cleansing ourselves form our natural perfumes scented in our bed
    I was in a different universe everytime
    Feeling as if I was Venus and you were on the moon and meet again
    But it was a night I'll never forget
    And tomorrow I hope will be the same! :)
    (just remember I'm a virgin)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa!!!
    dis was fire & desire flowing wit pure essence tappin
    tyte drop!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: subtle but packed with "TKO and TNT"...

    my sister...this was albiet the "hotness" and then some

    and then that last line...gave a little playful flair

    *Applause*....I loved it!

    :bowdown:
     
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    still feeling the depth of dis one here sista....whewwwww!
     
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    This was sensual, but it had a tender side to it as well. Flow on poet.
     
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    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank-u I applaude u all for your love :terrific: :terrific: :terrific:
     
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    most welcome sista keep flowing
     
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