Black Poetry : The Never Ending

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you really hurt me or is it
    That I don't love me enough to
    See that we are not for each other
    I can see far enough to know
    The difference
    Between love and some
    Counterfeit interpretation of what it could should
    And would be if only
    I were a little bit
    Smarter or stronger
    or smaller
    When would it end
    You would continue to request
    Change and I would faithfully oblige
    Until Finally I fall
    apart and die an empty death
    Not knowing in fact
    Who the h*** I was
    But no alas I see a new point on the horizon
    As I prepare to leave your heart
    Broken and in despair I notice
    That the story does change and your
    Requests no longer the same as I walk away
    And you wonder what you are
    allowing to leave you
    Let me tell you the greatest love you've ever known
    The queen who sat beside you on your thrown
    the beat of your heart and its truth
    the offspring of our ancestors roots
    And most of all a woman who
    would do anything for you
    And you apologize and request that I stay
    So............
    I grant your wish
    Only to wake up to the old hardening requests the next day
    The cycle continues as it began you treat me poorly
    And yet I still call you my man
    The never ending
    :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how i feel this the end can be long and waiting
    yet the love of self and mindful wisdomize knowz
    when the heart is ready walk away and surely new
    love seek u as u are for who u are and what u are
    well felt poetess
     
  3. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you the never ending must end at some time
     
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    Nice poem...It is hard to walk away sometimes because things seem unfinished.
     
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    " It is hard to walk away sometimes because things seem unfinished. "

    Great point Bigdrizzle.

    Love is so deep it has roots that hold you in place. Your heart says go, your feet say stay. Your mind just swirls in circles with confusion. But after once given a second time, no strike three is due. :bye:
     
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    Love should only request that you be who you are, to let that real you shine so that the other person can know if you are the one for them or not. I believe in compromise for love in some cases, but not if it means the death of self. I feel what you're saying indeed.
     
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    Hi soulful

    I learned in life, to..Never say Never!!
    cause chances are, change will never come, and you don't deserve that.
    You are a Queen to all ...
    and a footstool to none
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the insight and input I'mproud to say that the stiuation in question has been resolved it happened a while ago and I never put it into woords that individual I myself are the closest of gfriends with no chance at current of ever becoming lovers again so the cycle is broken.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    GIRL IT'S TIME TO MOVE ON

    LOVE IS SIMPLE BUT PEOPLE OVER COMPLICATED IT BECAUSE THEY REALLY DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT "LOVE" REALLY IS
    AND THEY'RE NOT MATURE ENOUGH TO COMPREHEND

    PEACE IN YOUR JOURNEY POET

    DSS
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you and same to youalso street so'ja
     
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