Black Poetry : The Need to Focus

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Jun 29, 2008.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eve :

    it's mysterious Li

    how my sensei arrived in town so mysteriously

    [Li nods]

    i'm curious Li

    is he still furious with me?

    jet :

    Eve seriously, i don't think so

    eve :

    are you serious Li?

    [nods]

    [Eve pondering curiously]

    i want to see him again

    where's he staying?

    jet :

    at the Quality Inn i believe

    [putting on her coat]

    [grabs her shoulder]

    are you sure you're ready to put Howard's qualities in your smile?

    [Eve smiles]

    i'm ready



    love,

    eve & howard
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once eve can focus on what's important, she sees howard clearly. Another sweet write.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eve & Howard are the best....



    Much Luv
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks 4everluv :)

    thanks watzinaname :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again u did the thing
     
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