Black Poetry : The Naturalness Of We

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  1. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the naturalness
    of you
    sweet saltiness
    impregnate my nostrils
    my lungs fill of your essence...
    so deep the taste of you
    permenantely burned on my
    tastebuds filling me until
    my cup runs over and spills
    to the floor
    your natural state of being
    mesmerizing me charming me
    making me dance to the tune
    of ya mental drum I hear the
    beatz in ma head moving
    slowly in tune to thee thinking
    your thoughts before words are
    uttered


    ©UbZoRbShUn
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me be the first to say...

    I dug the flow of this peice! I am however unable to select a favorite line... whole thang was lovely Shun!

    Uh huh...
    Reas
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorbshun....


    umm hmmmm.... i smell love in da air!! :)

    this was beautiful sister dear!!

    *keepdoinyourthang*

    One.
    Sunny~
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you my friend... the whole thang ya say......



    Sunny, it is and I myte be choking (don't pat me on the back this tyme sis)




    One
     
  5. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this

    reeks of raw sensuality sis! Yeeeeal!

    T
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preciate it!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WHOA!!

    I LOVED HOW U FLOWED THIZ OUT
    LIKE FINGER LICKIN GOOD ..............MO! MO! MO!
    COZ I BE LOVIN' DES.:toast: :D
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$

    you know Im good for one or two every once in a while.
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorb~

    Lovin' the "nat(you)ral" flow of this piece ~

    Keep workin' it sis', this is tight to death!!

    One.
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks. sometymes you just gotta put it out there you know.