Black Poetry : The Natural Order

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  1. strgblkwoman

    strgblkwoman Member MEMBER

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    The passion to teach with splendor and style, the natural order for rearing a child. The nurture of parents both male and female promotes the fullness to balance the scale. When scales are unbalanced, dubiety breathes. The child loses self where lack is conceived.

    When identity’s questioned and no answers in sight, self esteem falls so deeply from shadows of light. For the love and the nourishment may lack unaware, thus the search for completeness leaves the soul bare.

    The child grows deprived the abundance of life, searching for love through a husband or wife. As time passes by, the search empty yet still … then child having child is another sad pill.

    This remedy’s temporal for the void still remains. A hollow-ache and the source of great pain. For the cycle repeats when the child is unhealed, teaching those things they found unrevealed.

    The well-rounded one finds true love from within. The seeds planted young for each blossoms a friend. The mother, the father, their bond forms the cord for completeness that’s balanced through love from the Lord.

    The one parent home may produce equal fruit, when an opposite gender mentors the youth. The natural order is treasure refined, it imparts self-assurance for true peace of mind.
     
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    yesssssss! indeed u speak on coz i'm listening
    so true . a BILLBOARD MASTERPIECE !
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SBW,

    On point...I like the way you put it down here!!!

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    Enjoyable read... Great message!


    souldeep!
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    deep and so true. thanks for the food queen. peace.
     
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    strgblkwoman, we are living proof of this MASTERFUL reproof.

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    The Natural Order is akin to a child longing to attain love whereever they may find it. Unfortunately, it is often sought after in the wrong manner and seemingly found in the wrong person. We must cherish our loved ones when they are young so they mature in a healthy manner: physically and mentally. Sometimes, self-esteem falls short in our youth when parents and other significant others neglect to encourage, embrace, and guide their loved ones in the right directions. Thank you for your compliments. Some are truly living proof of the experience communicated through the Natural Order.
     
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