Black Poetry : The Nasty Poem

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The nasty poem

    I’m a kleptomaniac, good-looking thief
    I desire abundantly to steal your panty draws
    Its exciting to my passions to rob the software
    By throwing the kit Kat high into the air,
    I’m hoping it will turn back into sunshine

    Then proceed to shine & light up my life
    Rock my world with the heat of the rays
    Oh please, please make me warm
    As I go down into the face of the deep

    In your absence, all silk draws are stuffed & preserved
    Their all trophies and hung above my bedroom mirror
    To remind me of all the hoochie prey
    I smell them from time to time when I’m lonely

    And I can’t wait to rub your belly again
    By rubbing the belly you become a belly
    My tongue loves the pit of the navel
    For it reminds me of the deep and you knee deep

    I only possess two bronze rocks; wish I had 3
    But what I got can bounce all day for play
    And if I play them real hard and cool
    The force will cause you to rent spring water

    Perhaps this water will cool me down
    And quench all thy thirst and needs
    So that I can relax and rest
    And dream of another day to come
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *Whew*... :hot: some of you brothers...
    always trying to keep the heat turned up in here... :D
    Go on "Poet of the Week"
    Flex those skills...
    All eyes on you... :hot:
    or rather this fire you just started... :devil:

    Blaze on...Poet...Blaze on... :hot:
     
  3. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :smokin: Ok, I really am going to pick up a bad habit from you brothers if I ain't careful! :spin: Loved this flow Poet of the Week! Keep bringin' em
     
  4. caramelpython

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    :smokin: Smoking Post poet of the week!!! :grin:
    Feeling the flames I see....... :devil:
    Droping joints right up my poetic alley..... Dap'z :toast:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Nasty Poem? Well, it has some spice, and some heat, and...a strong sensual quality. I prefer to think of it, as a sort of naughty poem...:) Keep flowing poet of the week.
     
  6. Khasm13

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    lolol...yeah, this could have been nastier...
    matta fact, nasty is a way of life up in here
    QQ'n around....:lol:
    keep it live poet of the week...it was long overdue
    in my eyes...i hope you check us on on da regular dun...
    because you are more then welcome here...
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woo-wee!!! Nice nasty poem, i could almost feel it. Keep doin the [email protected] thang!!! :luvv: :read: :wave: :roll:
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

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    well this was hot...
    naughty i would say
    i likes
    very well done
    poet of the week....
    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. queentswana

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    You only possess "2" bronze rocks; but wish you had "3"?...
    well you'll need more than "3" once you're dealing with me.

    I've been know to bring walls down, and mountains crumble too
    come ride on my pony...let me show you what I can do.

    Forget the spring water, and pull out the hose,
    cause once I get started...anything goes...

    Then I'll work on those bronze rocks, with my inner pliers
    and you'll need that darn hose...to put out the :flame: "fire".​

    okay, I liked this piece and come on, bring the heat this week, cause we know you can do it. I enjoyed this poem and thanks for sharing it.
     
  10. Alpha Male

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    REPLY TO AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE, Congradulations on being poet of the week
    This poem here is definitely not pened by a mind that is weak
    Keep your wit sharp and your pens inked
    because a poet write for life even when he can'nt speak



    AACOOLDRE, SEIZE THE DAY
    MY FRIEND
    A GREAT POEM YOU HAVE MADE
     
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