Black Poetry : The Naked Poem

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The nasty poem

    I’m a kleptomaniac, good-looking thief
    I desire abundantly to steal your panty draws
    Its exciting to my passions to rob the software
    By throwing the kit Kat high into the air,
    I’m hoping it will turn back into sunshine

    Then proceed to shine & light up my life
    Rock my world with the heat of the rays
    Oh please, please make me warm
    As I go down into the face of the deep

    In your absence, all silk draws are stuffed & preserved
    Their all trophies and hung above my bedroom mirror
    To remind me of all the hoochie prey
    I smell them from time to time when I’m lonely

    And I can’t wait to rub your belly again
    By rubbing the belly you become a belly
    My tongue loves the pit of the navel
    For it reminds me of the deep and you knee deep

    I only possess two bronze rocks; wish I had 3
    But what I got can bounce all day for play
    And if I play them real hard and cool
    The force will cause you to rent spring water

    Perhaps this water will cool me down
    And quench all thy thirst and needs
    So that I can relax and rest
    And dream of another day to come

    By Andre Austin
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HUMMMM!!!

    DA NASTY TRUTH U SPEAKETH
    U JUST FLOW HEAD ON WIT IT!!
    AS THE SPRINKLE OF COOL WATER CHILL
    YA FLAME SOMEWHAT
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Flow

    Caught me off guard though...I wasn't expecting all dhat...I hope a gulp of that cool water cools you down. :p Or you might wanna make a phone call...
     
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    "By throwing the kit Kat high into the air,
    I’m hoping it will turn back into sunshine "

    These lines were too precious poet...or maybe it's just that I'm wayyyyy tooooo visual for my own **** good....

    Can anybody else see this?? lol

    This was my first time sampling your flow poet...and I enjoyed this one very much

    *where-the-sun-don't-shine*


    :D :D
     
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