Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Music of Your Moans

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Aug 21, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    within your moans
    a melody so beautiful
    sweet music
    from the deepest row of love's concert hall
    a sound unlike any other
    covering the musical scale
    without taking a breath
    jumping from low bass
    to the highest alto
    uncontrolled magic
    Coltrane and Miles
    Mozart and Gershwin
    Stevie and Ella
    all rolled into one
    instruments inside you
    play on and on
    the conductor smiles

    BE
    (c) 2002
     
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    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, my Brotha...nothing more beautiful than the music in your woman's moans. Speak on it.

    MOJO
     
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    mr edwards.


    mmmm hmmmm... i liked this!! :)
    truthful-ly? ...it made me lick my lips!

    thanks for sharing.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    man dis was da birth of a new jazz tune from da room of love
    BE......... ya romancing dem ladies thoughts within....flow on
    DR. LOVELACE
     
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    That was truly unique....loved it!
     
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    ****.

    my soul sighed...
    the music of your moans.
    just beautiful man. way beautiful.

    d
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa now~~~
    lovin it...lovin it..loving it!!!!!
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE, I can't believe I have not comented on this one, I have read it many times, it is one of my most favorite of your pieces, or of anyones for that matter. This one is Brilliant poetry.
     
  9. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets very much.

    bbe
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's it, exactly. Tight.

    Saleem
     
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