Black Poetry : The Music My Pen Makes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Jun 22, 2003.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 11, 2001
    Messages:
    712
    Likes Received:
    3
    Location:
    Atlanta, GA
    Ratings:
    +3
    Shhhhhh can you hear that ?
    That funky beat
    The rhythmical rat ta tat tat
    That imminates from my soul ?
    Shhhhhh
    Can you hear that
    The island beat resonating with clever licks
    And creative drum beats
    Oh my God
    Can you hear what I hear
    Ahhhh suki suki now
    Get it on
    Get it down
    Come on now
    Shhhhhh
    Can you hear that ?
    The mystical lyrics rising and falling
    All over you and I
    Can’t help but sway
    Makes my hips swivel
    Makes my arms wind
    Makes my knees dip and swerve
    Oh my God
    Shhhhhh can you hear that ?
    The sound of my pen hitting paper
    Laying down sweet, sweet words
    Documenting my heart and soul
    Life’s mysteries unfolding to the rhythms of the ink
    Laying before you beautiful sheet music to dance through
    Shhhh turn down the radio
    And lay your ear to my pad
    Cause what you hear
    That rhythm
    That oh so funky beat
    The clever licks and bad *** drum beats
    That’s the music my pen makes

    Natasha
     
  2. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 11, 2003
    Messages:
    1,360
    Likes Received:
    2
    Ratings:
    +2
    feelin' your flow.
    peace
     
  3. Laydee Chups

    Laydee Chups Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 10, 2003
    Messages:
    38
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    London
    Ratings:
    +0
    I was feelin the rhythm woven into that poem. heavi stuff
     
  4. mz_agapeluv

    mz_agapeluv Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 18, 2003
    Messages:
    36
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    janitorial/ daycare
    Location:
    Ohio
    Ratings:
    +0
    aww suki suki now that is sweet.... feelin that funky beat
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
    this is tyte....i like it!
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    yea.... i like this!! yea i can hear the rhythm and ur flow was smooth. tyte!! keep it comin....
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,752
    Likes Received:
    28
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Educational/Human Resources field
    Location:
    Chicago, IL
    Ratings:
    +28
    Sounds like soom good *** music ;) :laugh:
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    539
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +604
    HEARD THAT

    Wonderful!
     
  9. Shango

    Shango Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 5, 2003
    Messages:
    87
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Chef
    Location:
    Atlanta
    Ratings:
    +0
    Ahhhhhhhh......Feeling it.........very artistically written........painted a nice picture of flow of words.......
     
  10. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 28, 2003
    Messages:
    518
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Student at MHS.
    Location:
    a perfectly blighted planet where soul-searching i
    Ratings:
    +1
    what can i say that hasn't already been said...
    feelin ya flow ma....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Music Makes
  1. MsInterpret
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    287
  2. Natasha
    Replies:
    3
    Views:
    469
  3. DjajiPrime
    Replies:
    10
    Views:
    199
  4. Ausura
    Replies:
    49
    Views:
    1,375
  5. Kemetstry

    Black Entertainment : MUSIC QUESTION?

    Replies:
    4
    Views:
    152