Black Poetry : The Music Maker

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With a talented tongue
    she plays his sequoian skin flute
    like no other wood
    making sweet music while fingering
    lightly the hole with a soft blow...

    A "Fellatio Harmonic"
    wind humming solo
    kissing each key above
    and licking every octave
    below

    From parted lips she
    inserts the instrument
    ready to hear the sounds
    of his repressed memories
    that were never forgotten
    and those that are remembered
    like second nature
    rising -- due north at high noon

    The 'sword of passion'
    standing at attention
    sprayed her a symphony
    of fluid notes
    that created a lover's
    musical monsoon



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. alyce

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    My sistah....

    you have a wonder-full way of introducing each verse with the most tantalizing 1st lines.....

    i.e.

    "With a talented tongue..."
    " A 'Fellatio Harmonic'..."


    and then you serve it up with such delicious, lip-smacking-****-good imagery besides.....bringing the best things to remembrance.... :)

    such as

    "...ready to hear the sounds
    of his repressed memories
    that were never forgotten
    and those that are remembered
    like second nature..."


    and

    "...sprayed her a symphony
    of fluid notes
    that created a lover's
    musical monsoon"


    ...just wanna thank a sistah soul 2 soul, this moanin :D

    a
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooookey, dokeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! who in the heck turned up the heat in here? oh, it's you again...****, ****, ****

    blak
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah A

    Gurlfrynd ~ you sure know how to re-capture and bring forth into full view your thoughts ... and I thank you kindly for pin-pointing the parts that you read that stick with you...

    This piece I have read a handful of times and it clearly is my favorite flavor of the month :lol: My creative juices just flowed forth on this one :D

    I'm glad you enjoyed the read just as much as I enjoyed writing it and re-reading it myself!~ Thanks for the sistahly support.


    One :heart:

    N2
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Darlin', for you -- I'll turn up the heat! If ya' want, I'll even give you an extra blanket so that you can snuggle whenever you read... :D

    Thank you dollface! :kiss:
     
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    N2ursoul....

    Has to give you the props on this melodious flow...nicely done.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    epiphany

    Gracias mami ~

    I'm glad you enjoyed the read!!
     
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    Say it!

    you give a pretty neat twist to a subject often abused.. in verse anyway- got me at attention-- I mean got my attention over here.

    Say on.
     
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    N2....Care to share some music over here in the Lighthouse.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE SONG YA SINGING

    IS BEAUTIFUL FROM UP HERE N2 YA DOING IT AGAIN
     
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