Black Poetry : THE MOST VICIOUS METAPHORS ON THE INTERNET

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE MOST VICIOUS METAPHORS ON THE INTERNET

    My flames legit and rotten but like a plain knit cotton// shirt you
    Can wear on the block everywhere like ROCCAWEAR// true
    This rabbit fabric is hot, fun to blast it wearing none elastic
    Shoes// and melting plastic crews// like candle wax, this stuff drastic
    I’m bazaar and ill in here like a bar filled with beer//
    Get cats drunk of this funk my stats sunk// ships sincere
    In the Atlantic Ocean with romantic potions// am I clear?
    This stuff gets cats high like bald mountains and wet like
    Tall fountain// leaking h/2/0 that mean water I get hype
    Lyrics in my mind along with spirits fine and divine// only
    Like a balcony I’m an elevated platform educated strongly
    With stats that swarm// like bees over honey try sting eyes
    With bling vibes cats sees money around my neck stuff cling to guys
    Like dew rags dodge desires like large fires a man can want
    Too much and do a true search and come up empty can’t flaunt
    Failure or other paraphernalia
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    I understand why u are madd...........but the most vicous metaphors on the internet.......

    those are some VERY big shoes to fill bra!

    flow with your mind
    and not with your emotions
    and you will succeed in getting people to listen
    like the sound of the ocean
    nothingelse to say
    but so beautiful
    see what being in harmony with poetry
    can do to you
    my brotha just relax
    and will it to happen
    be at one with yourself first
    then, you'll be real at this rappin'
    I used to flow wit' attitude too
    I'm not madd at you for doin' that
    just one question, the mind
    exactly what do you do wit' that
    I hope build and elevate
    cause that's what we're supposed to do
    I'm not here to alienate
    I'm just tryin' to get close to you
    like a big bra
    is supposed to do
    and I'm not attackin', just reactin'
    cause I got so much hope in you
    I'm offering a helping hand to re-direct your energy
    my response to "cats on this board" says I'm doin' what I'm supposed to do!

    peace poet.........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word madd dis was heavy down to da core
    i feel ya and whats in store for more viciously
    lyrical maze of phrases. do yo thang brutha
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    info-moetry DON'T KNOW WHAT THAT'S ALL ABOUT BU TMINE IS ABOUT THEM METAPHORS

    OK RICH THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Penning metaphors to travel and penetrate the mind...keep the words flowin Madd.
     
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    1poetsought ~
     
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