Black Poetry : the most beautiful angel of them all

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  1. biggerthomasjr

    biggerthomasjr Member MEMBER

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    i once stood lost, but now stand blind;
    when i did see, then i did find:
    angels of darkness & angels of light.
    which am i? both. which is he? neither.

    i now stand blind & and happily lost;
    when i was found, twas when i saw:
    angels of darkness & angels of light -’
    of them the only thing that matters,
    the only thing u need know is the most beautiful angel of them all, is me.

    now, here comes god, dumb ugly smuck its not my fault his face is yuck. he can’t accept the fact and such that i am the angel whom he longs to be and wants to touch; yet he’s the (((GOD))) and such. and what am i? what am i, just an angel!

    why are u jealous, trick?

    I once did hear now I stand deaf;
    my hearing’s gone; there is none left for
    angels of darkness & angels of light.
    Which am I? I am both. Which is he? He is neither.

    I now stand deaf whence once I heard -
    now silence. I hear no words save
    angels of darkness & angels of light -
    of them the only thing that matters,
    the only thing u need know is the most beautiful angel of them, is me.

    here’s comes god he’s mad again. it’s not my fault he has no friends. he said angels were just above men as though he were not one of them. another lie he did tell is that he cast me out to hell. i left heaven without a doubt. who was he to cast one out?

    god, why are u jealous of an angel?

    I once did speak now I stand mute.
    my speech is gone for i spoke to angels of darkness & angels of light.
    Which am i. both. Which is he? Neither.

    I now stand mute whence once i spoke;
    now silence, i speak no more save angels of darkness & angels of light
    of them the only thing that matters,
    the only thing u need know is the most beautiful angel of them, is me.


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    my poem after thoughts:
    the most beautiful angel of them all is light & darkness. the invisible god of the whitstians is neither. the values of their invisible god is as hollow, vain and hypocritical as its followers.
     
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    word up...the greatest beauty of angels is Darkness as it become light
    tyte write
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    few can really appreciate the depth

    because we've been programmed to praise one thing and one thing only

    "federal reserve notes"

    light & dark

    ying & yang

    day & night

    earth & the heavens

    live and understand

    great piece poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It pays to see beyond what appears to be obvious. You represented the many shades well here.
     
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    biggerthomasjr:
    Good Piece Poet!!!!
     
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    biggerthomasjr Member MEMBER

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    thank you poets & angels
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do Love how you were the true angel all along
    Through all the lies that Had to be true
    Beautiful Poem BiggerThomasjr.
    ~Peace Brother~
     
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