Black Poetry : The morning touch

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  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This morning she touched me
    Gently
    Poeticly
    Making me aware of the morning sun rays bathing my skin
    Hearing her breathe was like music
    Her gestures were like lyrics to songs my heart had written
    My hands slid over her baby soft skin
    Looking for a place to rest

    This morning she touched me
    Delicately
    Spiritualy
    Making me appreciate love and lust
    Hearing her hand grace my skin
    Made me want to repeat last night's passion
    But i respected the moment in silence and gratitude

    This morning she touched me
    Seductively
    Sensually
    Making me gaze into her beautiful eyes
    Hearing her thoughts of satisfaction and passionate bliss
    Communicating every one with her soft touches
    She conversed with no words
    I listened with no interruptions

    This morning she touched me
    And fed my soul.....
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    see thas what i'm talking about bruh...
    something about the morning
    and being with a loved one...
    this vibe was felt...keep scribe'n
    one love
    khasm
     
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    yes... that kind of :flirt: and that kind of touch is what makes the world a better place...inside YOUR place. that's so sweet when you can wake up in the morning...look and touch your other half...and it cause your head to :spinn: ing, and makes your body :jumping: for joy...oh what a love...
     
  4. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you felt this one

    Khasm- you never know until you're there right? thanks for the love
    Queen- Sounds like you were there this morning!!!! :D
     
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    This was just beautiful. You drew us into that moment with those words.
     
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    how beautiful and enchanting...you drew me in to your picture with dis right here...

    peace unity love
    2fish
     
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    whoa - I swear I wasn't copying off of watz!!! I noticed what she wrote AFTER I posted - that proves that this is the effect of YOUR WRITING - Powerful and Real...

    One
     
  9. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz- Verbal imagery is something else...am I gifted like you?
    Two fish- I'm grateful you feel a brother's gift......I'm still high off of "You won't cry for me" though...this site is da ish
     
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    oh so nice:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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