Black Poetry : The Morning Kiss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by realrawism, Jan 20, 2004.

  1. realrawism

    realrawism Active Member MEMBER

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    The morning kiss
    Sex for breakfast
    Touching the skin where the bottom of your breast ends
    Holding on!
    Moving on, to another position
    I pause...... and wait for you to inhale
    but never let you catch your breath.
    I marvel at your comic book angles.
    Holding on!
    Torsos Twisting, Lotion shared, The torch is lit, Heaven is declared.
    Learning how with each stroke, not too fast,
    I might produce some KIN-FOLK.
    Every move is respected, every sound is projected.
    Nothing is wasted or misplaced.
    Face to Face
    The morning kiss
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk about a wake up call...this was spicy and sweetly written.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow
    loving the bliss indeed
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss: What a way to wake up! This was just so beautiful and sexy. Much love to you!
     
  5. realrawism

    realrawism Active Member MEMBER

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    Much respect and thanks. I will not take any of your love for granted.
    Pe-ace!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wish i could wake up like that:lol: tightly written:hot:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well now...
    this was on flame
    nice drop
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ow................

    :huh:








    Like this..

    and welcome :wave:


    LoveL
     
  9. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amen!! Can I wake up to a morning kiss like this! Dang!!
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maaaaad Props....

    This was totally off the richtor...
    the charts...the globe...
    any form of scale...it supercedes...

    ***Applause & Snaps***
     
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