Black Poetry : the morning joy of she

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakrok, Dec 18, 2002.

  1. blakrok

    blakrok Member MEMBER

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    in your lungs, you can feel it slicing
    like the first breath of frigid air
    after slumbering through a cozy night

    in your mind you can sense it lingering
    like the misty place you float in after snooze before
    the beeping brings you crashing down to reality

    in your soul you can taste it sublimely
    like the agonizingly sweet seconds
    before body shuddering release

    that moment,
    when you turn over,
    stre-e-etch,
    feel someone next to you
    and
    realize
    that
    no it was not a dream,
    yes you are awake
    and Lord,
    is she really here?
    ...****...
    she is really here!
     
  2. SatinWayz

    SatinWayz New Member MEMBER

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    Your poem was really beautiful. It brighten my day here at work
     
  3. blakrok

    blakrok Member MEMBER

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    you brightened my day by responding. thanks for sharing your thoughts with me...
    peace
    blakrok
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ecclectic piece/peace........
    nice flow ... good read.



    N2
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this

    nice work
     
  6. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww, that's so sweet...i understand the feeling fully...
     
  7. Godfather

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    this was nice-- much enjoyed

    Peace
    Godfather
     
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