Black Poetry : "the morning calls me"

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there are so many
    other worlds besides mine...
    that l should be joyful and not feel pain
    that l should be painful and not feel joy

    there are so many
    other worlds beyond mine...
    that l should be complacent and non-cordial
    and not refuse to eat and drink from your table

    there were so many
    other worlds before mine...
    to be stuck in my own
    for there will be many after mine is gone..

    the morning calls me..
    and these are my thoughts.
     
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    Nice Drop j'hiah

    Nice early morning drop of thought.
    Dew drop, and this mornings thought are tied into one.
    Answer the call.
     
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    Deeply reflective
    You always bring a "message"
    This opened up my mind
    like a fresh pot of coffee...
    Indeed...these were the
    thoughts of the morning...

    Nice flow...
    Sage
     
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    Whoa, how deep can you get? Not much more than this. I love poems that keep me thinkin after the fact, and this is one, brothah. Props.
     
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    you took me there diggin the vibe strongly
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just like a wake up and divine moment ........word !
     
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    Well that's one way to get your day started on the right foot, deep introspective thinking. I enjoyed this j'hiah.
     
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    Really enjoyed your morning's inspiration, true and wise.
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :coffee:

    errabody,
    the love has been humbly taken..
    thanks for hearing my morning thoughts.
     
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    nice to see u back bruh....
    interesting thoughts in da morn man...hmmmm
    don't be a stranger boyz...
    one love
    khasm
     
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