Black Poetry : The moon was 11:49

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jul 16, 2003.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyme zone of stilliness
    tyte scribe poet !
     
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    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you done did it
    this is mellow and smooth
    very romantic
    one.
     
  3. angelicsage

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    Rich, yes the tyme zone of stillness in a moment captured.
    A moment that equaled to eternity. Thanks, Angeli


    Locust, your words are warm and graciously accepted, thank you
    will be looking for more of you, as well. Peace, Angelic
     
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    l read this before :wink:

    the bar of elegance has been raised past midnight
    you're the bomb girl

    jh.
     
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    this is off the hook gurl keep um comin
     
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    you set a trance like mood
    with the words that you exude...
    this was butta
    peace
    khasm
     
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    so eloquent and powerfull...
    gifted poet u R :)
     
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    J'hiah..........you have such a way with words.......with me, Thank you for the luv, much returned! Angelic


    The story......thanks for taking the time to drop me a line of support. Peace!


    Khasm....Big "Thank You", Always happy to have such phenom.. of a poet stop by.


    Triniti.........Blessings to you for the beautiful words you leave me. Thank you....will be looking for you as well.
     
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    The trickle that lingers with the force of a hurricane.

    Sage...spoken slow, sown so deep... deep were the tones of mellow ambiance throbbing in waves of orgasmic "didyoufeelthatlookingformeinthedaytimewithaflashlightthisistheonlypairIworetowork " overtones.

    Well written and heartfelt.
     
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