Black Poetry : The Mood

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Mar 31, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Mood

    The Mood
    Scented Candles
    Warmed body oil
    Insatiable By Prince on repeat.

    The Mood
    Rain storm
    with the windows open.

    The Mood
    The beach at night
    under the moonlight
    as the waves roll over us

    The Mood
    Body Rub
    Rose petals
    on the bed and
    in the tub.

    The Mood
    Your Arms
    Your Voice
    Your Touch

    The Mood
    Just right when
    it's me and you.

    :flirt:
     
  2. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simple and moving

    loving u for this heartfelt very
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sir,
    I am happy that you
    like that piece. :thanks:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    two as one so sweetly pose'd
    flow on lovin it
     
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    sweet flow
     
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    Well you set the mood in this piece, nice flow.
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

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    i liked this alot
     
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    I wanted to bring this back to the top.
     
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    i like this
    good work girl.
    peace
     
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