Black Poetry : The Months of Us

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last Christmas we proclaimed our love to each other
    We became each other destined lover
    We loved and sexed until the sun's light came over
    Our nude bodies twisted like rubber
    It the first time I EVER
    Cristained another
    soul with my open chocolate passage of matter
    But I did it to you now it matters

    Last January we moved in together
    We thought that if we moved in together things were destined to be greater
    But we also let it be known that even apart our love would grow higher
    Well, it did get better
    For at least 3 weeks together
    Then after the third week we couldn't even stand to be in the same room together
    I was young at the time and it really didn't matter

    Last Febuary around Valentine's Day we mended all our differences and settled it
    We once again became those two love birds that fit
    We lived and breath each other's name
    We felt as if we were once again one in the SAME
    But little did I know later those naive thoughts would be the ones to blame
    For my later never ending pain

    March came around and we were the neighbors favorite couple
    I let you use my car and it was just simple
    I loved my man from heaven with the golden dimple
    The golden brown face with not one pimple

    April was my birthday
    And I knew something was wrong because as we laid
    You paid
    Me no attention and I didn't get laid
    I got not one kiss
    Or no wishful bliss
    I just wanted to hit you with my fist
    Because the most important day you missed

    Things started to get real bad in May
    You went away and that's where you stayed
    I don't know what you did but my mind is not to be played
    Didn't come home for days
    Ignoring all the stuff I says
    You became the man from hell in different ways
    And those actions didn't pay

    June came around so quickly
    And every passing moment I had to be around you I became sickly
    I started to wonder why you picked me
    To play around with.......you really played me
    I was wet for you......then you dried me
    I was so quick to jump into a relationship that I never found out who you be
    And it made me pain........and not only figuratively

    July I had had enough of you
    I got up and phoned you
    I decided that I was no longer gonin' to be played a fool
    Then I heard a knock on the door it was you
    You set me on the bed......you set on the stewl
    And you apologized a hundred and two
    Now how could I look at you
    And tell the man that I at first loved that I despised you?

    August , it got real cold
    I was looking for that man that said he loved me to hold
    And you did come this time dressed in gold
    You were once again my light shining in armor....my pole
    You knew just how to hold
    And fold
    my body in the right places......you were MY giglo
    My love’s throld

    September, I once again scented something was goin' on
    I was sittin' at home and I heard your cell phone
    So I answered it..........and it was a lady you had known
    I asked her how did she know you.......and she said you were HER man while she was home
    I quickly hung up the phone
    And decided to discuss this while alone
    But that night and many to follow you never came home
    So I cried and appreciated being alone

    October I was truly a loner
    I was pissed at you and contemplated on phonin’ her
    I knew in my heart you were with her
    But maybe this split was for the better
    And since you felt the same way too........your clothes I gathered
    And put them in the basement to be further
    from the man I knew too few to be together
    The man that left me with stormy weather
    And bolts of thunder to gather

    I don’t know why
    But in November you came by
    And brought a pie
    I looked at you and wished you to die
    But the month ended with a cry
    For you got on one knee and asked I
    to be a wife to you and I can’t lie
    I said yes............at first I thought it was just the midnight high
    But I realized that deep inside I
    Really loved you and this is why
    No matter what we went through you never said goodbye
    You just came right back to tha soul mate which is I

    It’s now December again
    And I am back where this friendship began
    I’m once again in search of that man
    The I loved more than a friend
    And this is one thing I can’t comprehend
    You not around to pin
    or lend
    a helpin' hand to your only spiritual friend
    I feel as if you are my ONLY true sin
    Because I let you play me as a fool even then
    And even now my heart has not mended
    But I know that is friendship is at it's end



    GOODBYE MY SOULMATE..............MY FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    WE HAVE COME TO OUR END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    the mental mind open and the heart closed
    tyte scribe sistah foxy
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow indeed
    nice drop....
    flow gurl.....
    very heartfelt flow
     
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    all within a year...as the time move forward you have as well ..nice one sister...observation is on the deep for real
    Happy New Year
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    STAY STRONG!

    AS FREDRICH NIETZCHE SAID "That which does not
    kill you only makes you strong!" And you have grown from
    this experience most definitely it's in your scribe to survive!
    Praying for your peace and happiness...MS.LuciousB

    Blessings On Your House! :peace:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tight, girl! I can most def relate to the progression in this relationship, fo sure
     
  7. SayWord

    SayWord Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was tight. I felt your pain through your words. I can't even express how tight this peice is. I keep using the word "tight." You got my vocabulary stunted, that's how tight this is. I love it. :bowdown:
     
  8. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww......thank you so much ya'll.......although it not my personal experience......it is a neighbors of mine........but don't worry she read this poem and okayed that I tell her story through this unique rhyme...........but like so many of you said this experience only made her STRONGER as a person........thank for responding ya'll......thanks so very much
     
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