Black Poetry : The moment after....(platonic sex 2)

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  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHE SAID:
    Hold me closely my love
    Until I can feel your pounding heartbeat on my back
    Arrest my body with your strong arms while caressing me with your masculine hands
    Place gentle kisses upon my neck
    Whisper your love for me
    Hold my breasts in the palm of your hands and squeeze them with care
    While your warm toungue tickles every place it touches
    I'll moan your name as you touch my middle
    If you'll hold me tighter as my body shivers
    To your flawless tact I have surrendered
    I've opened my soul...you can enter

    HE SAID:
    I have longed to hold you my love
    My heart pounds with anticipation
    To handle your delicate body with care
    I smell the sweet scent of your skin and I'm famished for love
    I thirst for your juices to wet my toungue
    I'm erect in the right place
    My manhood throbs and pulsates aggresively
    Longing to penetrate your femininity
    With every thrust I go deeper inside you
    And tingle from countless sensations
    You moan my name as my seed gathers
    I go in deeper, harder, faster
    In passion's sweat we both lather
    And I'll pledge my love for you the moment after
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was spell bounding and sweetly laid
    flow on i'm listening
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, this was a spicy drop. Love the way you gave the 2 different perspectives.
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was def' some heat...
    I really like the "She said, He said"...
    and the final statements of each...
    hot & sentimental...
    nice flow!
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :devil: aahhhhh some "HEAT" back up on here... :devil:
    :shades:
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, this is tyte, i loved it,
    much :heart:
    -story
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot:
    yes :)
    i like your flows
    so much envision
    very nicely
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  8. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another dig up :thanks:
    To everyone who gave love
    Love you back tons!!!!!!!!!!!

    Peace and Love
     
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