Black Poetry : The Million Things Going On In My Life

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Flor_Rosada, Feb 16, 2004.

  1. Flor_Rosada

    Flor_Rosada Member MEMBER

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    A venomous poison flows freely through a person's veins,
    Terrorizing many and driving people insane.

    Bad luck as thunder strikes and money come up short,
    From playing on the casino table as a sport.

    What type of honor does a person have with this many unpurifications in their lives,
    Many who would dessert their children to leave their wives.

    A punishment that lasts to eternity,
    A punishment that does not gurantee a person to be free.

    The memories is the home movies, while the scars are your reenactments,
    Creating a isolation of society surrounded by a fence.

    Trying to reminice from yesterday's pain,
    With a ugly picture surrounded by a pretty frame.
     
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    let it be heard flow on dis was tyte flowing
     
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    you are sayin a world in few words, Flor. this is really deep
     
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    back to da top
     
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    tight drop
    ......Angel
     
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    Can't see the forest for the trees, someimes a person keeps standing in their own way. Deeply written piece.
     
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    Flor_Rosada

    This is tight. You're very expressive, descriptive. I like that. :D It helps to put me in the moment.

    :thanks: for sharing yourself with us.

    :toast:
     
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