Black Poetry : The Microphonist

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  1. Jahari Kavi

    Jahari Kavi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First off let me say that I'm not sure of all the words that are aren't accepted, but I attempted to clean this rhyme up a tad that a wrote a couple of years back......

    I’m spiritually blessed ta/ vividly/ lyrically wreck ya
    The poetry flowing is holy like city of mecca
    The mic disecta, bring incisions with supreme precision
    N##### seem deficient/ dreams is missin/ cause the king has risen
    Wit the proper etiquette/ fake imposters better get
    To they vacant slots/ claim they spots/ I’m ahead of it
    Leavin shredded bits/ when I grab the microphone and bust
    You ain’t dethronin us/ cloning us/ blowin ya bones to dust
    And I’m prone to crush/ anything that steps in my path or way
    I’m swingin like Cassius Clay/ the wrath I made is leavin you bastards slayed...
    And layed out…..the lyrics is rippin ya pages out
    It’s the flames that sprout, from a deranged/ blazin/ amazing mouth
    Ni### I’ll take ya clout/ to show u exactly what selfish means
    The flow will just melt ya team/ And bells will ring to lower your self esteem
    N#### the stealth we bring is like the state of ancient Romans
    Pure Michrophonist/ in ownage/ you can’t take the thrownage
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the fact that you cleaned this up a tad, here is a link to our Banned Words list. Diggin the rhythm of this piece, do you do spoken word? Enjoyed.
     
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    lyrical maze of greatness here ...continue to flow
     
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    Mad nice.

    Had me laughin and thinking I need you to ghostwrite for me >_>

    Big ups Brother, although you could clean it up even more. This was tight, flow was ill, you must've polished that skill for some time. Nuff respect.

    One.

    - Ikoro
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea

    that's what i say

    is this spoken word

    because it should be

    it's fire:11500::happens:
     
  6. Jahari Kavi

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    thanx for the props everyone....I used to spit and record a few years back. I never perfected my delivery (although I was getting better at it) and eventually I became frustrated with the hip hop industry, so I haven't written anything in about 2 years now. Rakim inspired me to write that piece though, because "he is the microphonist."