Black Poetry : the message

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Oct 17, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thespokesman has returned



    The return of the living
    Scars, scabs, one man gets stabbed
    Picking at my scab, scars grew, infectious
    Infections, blockade, detour my directions
    Deleted, failed inspection, misdirected
    Infected, so sick, diseased ****, un-erected
    Cranes, beams and pipes un-layed
    Paint water gun-sprayed

    Like a kid again, spit again, sidewalk, precipitate
    A baby’s skin moist when the body hydrates
    Like pure ecstasy, moisture not gliding astro
    Reaching for the astro, young lad watching Astro
    Cartoon cinema
    Unknown, unforeseen was my dilemma
    Delimit, so systemic, encrypted
    Like man’s experiments and Congo so scientific

    Spitting blood, cuz all my flows bleed
    One blood, one love, notice a man’s hug
    Just a tap, pat back, back back, chasing young Nat
    Turner, turning, for big mamas’ churning, raped on her back
    Legs up, spread, spread eagle, was whips, now its desert eagle
    For this is Spiegel, this is my people, marked landmark architecturally a steeple
    Like Gothic times, revolved revolutions, still spinning in Houston

    Be Continued…
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bring it on love da flow continue please
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice...bring da rest
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is tight and powerful - can't wait to see more.
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    word...
    supa tyte style...
    bring da rest...
    on da request...
    peace
    khasm
     
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