Black Poetry : the mendicant

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    make me beg for you.
    make me have memories of moment never lived.
    make me want what i cannot have, insatiably.

    cause to move to a desirous place of wantonness
    where my imagination is my solace, my dwell
    where my intuition is attune to your most sensitive sense
    where fantasy and reality are mortal enemies that fight to the death of me.

    i beg of you to make me feel.
    make me feel alive, vibrant, vivacious.
    make me feel sensual, and satiate my mind.
    make me feel you when the only you i feel is a memory yet lived.

    i beg. oh i beg of you make me taste your flavor.
    a flavor so salty sweet, sweet salty that i would so desire
    a flavor of lavish loving. a mental menagerie of mad lovin'
    a flavor that so tingles my taste buds that the buds turn to flower
    that bloom in the springtime of a memory yet lived.
    make me beg.

    make me beg. and beg again. a cry and beg
    until my cheeks are soaked with tears at the mere
    thought of a nanosecond of lovin' you. all in my mind.

    the mendicant
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Dug This Kla!!!!

    The Mendicant...

    Clever use of vocab here!!!

    Nice piece!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kla

    Definitely some tight Vocab goin on hea!!! I'm wit Q!

    Reas
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey thanks fam. keep the flow!!!
     
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    Make me beg!

    This here is a tyte piece poet.
    Yes Sir!
    :)
     
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    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH MY!

    the baby dominatrix in me luvs this flow poet...keep putting your thang down!

    dee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man bru!

    dis be tyght scribe fo sho!
    making me beg 4 mo!!!!!!!!!!
    mr poet.:)
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rashad, MizDee and $$Rich$$$. appreciate it!!!
     
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    Mendicant, huh?

    Mmmm. That was tyte as tight can be...
    I'm with Dee... that dominatrix deeeep down inside really felt that one. Keep blessing us with your mentals...

    By the way... LUV the vocabulary.