Black Poetry : The Me in We You Don't See

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes.. to lose yourself in someone else and they don't even realize you're missing! Good scribe, dearie... Loving it.
     
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    WOW... :jawdrop:
    This was like having my heart
    cut out...with a dull pain...
    I can see and I know...
    how terrible it is to be seen through
    ....mmm, this one touched me
    but your writing to convey it
    left me in a stupor of emotion
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    Sister...you're just plain awesome... ​


    ooooooooooooo
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling da mental twist on this piece
    the me in we u can't see can be a
    mirror image but a reality sometime
    one miss it once it's gone sometime
    the wake up call is made as u did here
    very tyte message sistah
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes it be like that..folks to full of themself to see the real you
    nice drop
     
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    You're a sensitive soul, and that gives you such a gift in writing. Poignant point in a beautiful scribe, poet.
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way you summed it up, toylin. Thank you, and btw, your flows have been on fire poet.
    Sage, yes, I dug deep with this one. Thank you for saying that I did the concept justice with my words sis. I'm indeed humbled.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your response Rich. Even someone who appears to be made of steal can have a meltdown. Much appreciated.
    Yes, sometimes it is like that blkangel. Thank you for your support on this.
    Perhaps a bit too sensitive at times gempis. Thank you for such kind words poet.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most props for this. This is deep and so real. "The Me in We You Don't See", now that's something you don't hear everyday but so many people long to say. I'm feeling this sistah.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sort of a tongue twister, that title, it just seemed like the right words to pen at the time krazelyricks. Thank you for the props young poet, you are awesome.
     
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