Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Sep 6, 2004.
Oh yes.. to lose yourself in someone else and they don't even realize you're missing! Good scribe, dearie... Loving it.
This was like having my heart
cut out...with a dull pain...
I can see and I know...
how terrible it is to be seen through
....mmm, this one touched me
but your writing to convey it
left me in a stupor of emotion
Sister...you're just plain awesome...
feeling da mental twist on this piece
the me in we u can't see can be a
mirror image but a reality sometime
one miss it once it's gone sometime
the wake up call is made as u did here
very tyte message sistah
sometimes it be like that..folks to full of themself to see the real you
You're a sensitive soul, and that gives you such a gift in writing. Poignant point in a beautiful scribe, poet.
Liked the way you summed it up, toylin. Thank you, and btw, your flows have been on fire poet.
Sage, yes, I dug deep with this one. Thank you for saying that I did the concept justice with my words sis. I'm indeed humbled.
Thank you for your response Rich. Even someone who appears to be made of steal can have a meltdown. Much appreciated.
Yes, sometimes it is like that blkangel. Thank you for your support on this.
Perhaps a bit too sensitive at times gempis. Thank you for such kind words poet.
Most props for this. This is deep and so real. "The Me in We You Don't See", now that's something you don't hear everyday but so many people long to say. I'm feeling this sistah.
Sort of a tongue twister, that title, it just seemed like the right words to pen at the time krazelyricks. Thank you for the props young poet, you are awesome.
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