Black Poetry : The Man Diet! Inspired by my sister's and the men who don't love us back!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twelve months one week and one day...
    Was the last time I had a good lay!
    By choice I put my toys and my teddies
    away.
    To save them for my chosen King (soon) someday!
    But , after the heartache and the engagement disaster, it's a little more
    substance that I am after.
    Now don't get me wrong, I still got the
    urges.
    But, just like poison from my system those require purges.

    My flavor of man seems to be high in demand.
    The women here like to catch as catch
    can.
    See I am not down with sharing a man.
    So I created the Man diet, and it started
    a riot.
    My sister's say B you done lost your mind...You know they all over that
    Lucious behind!
    But, truly I say, that I want it that way.
    Until they make love to my mind.
    They can't have not even a whiff of this divine behind.
    Not the front , the back, we ain't hitting the sack.
    I don't creep, don't shack and never
    turn back.

    Man diet is when you been through the ringer, the last man did it right, but in the love department he bit like a stinger.
    Had you thinking it was the forever kind of love, kind you never get enough of, but baby I was wrong.
    Now I am singing a different song.
    Long walks on the track, had to strengthen my back.
    Peaceful meditaion by the lake, reflecting on my mistake.
    I am dating that's right, but at the
    end of the night, a kiss and a hug
    is all that you get love.

    Now some men don't like it and they are soon gone away.
    But most of the good ones , like the challenge and they stay.
    I make it perfectly clear that I am special you see...and just any brother
    can't have a taste of me.
    I'm lucious and precious and sweet to the core, got flava to savor and madd skills galore.
    Got my Portfolio together ain't buried in debt, so the "Bestman " I want and it's the best man I will get.

    I don't have a set time for when this diet is over, but until I feel safe, then
    its just me and Kapone running in clover. My dog that's right he loves me for real...and going without sex for me ain't no big deal...Probably had more than my share in my lifetime.
    So I will have my feast again , when it's the right time.
    Don't think smooth talking will move me to surrender, I got my mind made up and it's no easy bender.
    When the King comes to court and coming he is...I'll be worth the wait!
    So for now I scribe , exercise and anticipate!

    BJS(C)2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice girl...i feel ya on dis
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa ....tyte flow feelin it deep too
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you go girl!...much love to you for being so strong.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot::hot::hot:
     
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    slammin sister, I'm on a man diet, bout had it with their antics

    Love ya skillz gurl

    The Dreamer
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl this was wonderful...:)
     
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    LoL yeaaaaaaaaaaah
    LOL I LIVE in the gym...somthin gotta take all my hyperness...:laugh:
    lovin that anotha sista is liftin up the mind stimulation :)
    keep it up wit ya lucious self :wink:
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is str8 hot! simple with a strong delivery... too tyte
     
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    sorry to hear dat hun...
    a real man will pass your way
    let'n those urges burn hot like da sun...

    but i hear ya...
    most of my brothern are just
    interested in t & a
    then wanna jet real fast...
    for real
    he's out there though....
    believe me cause i know...
    peace
    khasm
     
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