Black Poetry : The man behind the pen

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  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The man behind the pen
    Hurt and afraid
    Desperately
    Searching the world for meaning
    Running
    Hiding
    From past and future pain
    A victim, A victor
    Desperately
    Searching for a bridge
    To unite his contradictions
    In hopes for peace
    Crying
    Fighting
    Old and new demons
    The man behind the pen
    Guilty, Innocent
    Desperatley
    Searching for pennance
    To give and receive
    Wanting forgiveness
    Wanting to forgive
    Regretting
    Overcoming
    Trying to bury the past
    The man behind the pen
    The child behind the man
    The man/child
    Wanting to be free!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i truely feel this piece i know of a man behind a pen
    within myself tyte drop
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many different sides to the man behind the pen, nice flow.
     
  4. Earthly Allure

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    I could have sworn this was about me. LOL :hot:
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a very deep...

    and an OUTSTANDING write!


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  6. Nita

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    :)


    No longer be afraid
    Nor search the world for your worth
    because you're priceless in your being
    a gift to the world upon your birth
    a victim falling to pain
    but strength you've also gained
    a new peace within
    a powerful poet behind the pen
    cursing demons to release your sold
    bridging gaps, now complete and whole
    Overcoming
    Breaking free
    no longer fear bound
    but bound to be
    giving yourself
    as I give you me
    Desperately seeking
    while claiming victory
    searching with your soul
    so your heart's eye can behold
    the innocence I see
    that can never be sold
    Already forgiven
    regrets no more
    and long forgotten
    like a rotten core
    wanting to be free
    so I break loose these chains
    a man now FREE
    free to reign
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LIKES THE FLOW
    INDEED MANY
    FACES BEHIND THE PEN....
    DIGGIN THIS
    PEACE
    ANGEL
     
  8. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To the men and women behind the pen:
    I feel you all!!!!!!!!!
    Life gets hard behind the pen
    That's why we let the pen speak for us!!!

    RICH- As always thanks for the love bruh

    Watz- you said a mouthful!!!....thank you

    Earthly Allure- It was! It's about us all behind the poetic pen...keep scribin' poet

    Coco- Thanks for reading....let's dazzle each other with the God given gift of poetic expression!

    Nita- your addendum was sweet....I found much encouragement in that...thanks so much...much love 2U

    MZ BLKANGEL- So many faces indeed...thanks for diggin the flow...much love 2U2

    Peace and Love
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brotha what a picture you portrayed :jawdrop: tyte flow...Sooooooooooooooooooooooo
    when are we gon hear this LIVE in voice chat lol :look: :look: :D
     
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    Twision,
    I feel your words
    I really do.
    Nice potrait.
     
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