Black Poetry : The Luv I Can't Have

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I see you walk,

    All I think is you're the one,

    The one I love,

    And can't live with out,

    But if you ever would know,

    The truth that I feel,

    You wouldn't care,

    The fact that I need you,

    It makes you want me less,

    As I wonder around,

    Feeling all the pain,

    The pain you make me feel,

    Wishing you could know,

    But knowing you never can,

    Wanting it to work,

    Fearing the time if it does,

    I don't know why but if it does,

    Does work,

    Will it be what I want?

    I don't think so for some reason,

    The reason is that,

    That I don't know what I want,

    The fear I have is great,

    Almost over the top of the hope,

    Can I ever know?

    Know if you feel the same,

    Probably not,

    But that’s ok,

    Because I will just live,

    Live in secrecy,

    Against all I have ever wanted,

    Wanted to do with my life,

    If you would show me a sign,

    A sign of your feelings towards me,

    So that maybe I can know,

    Know how you feel,

    For all I know you could feel the same,

    But be like me,

    And to scared to tell me,

    But most likely not,

    You are so strong,

    In mind and body,

    So much stronger than me,

    But for all I wish,

    And hope with all my heart,

    You'll just never tell me,

    Is this the price I must pay?

    For being to afraid of you,

    Or is this a torture of my own devise,

    Matter,

    It does not,

    I think I am going to go and just think,

    Just think of you,

    And what could be,

    But will never be,

    Until I see you again,

    Good-Bye.


    Sending all my luv never the less
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's the worst feelin in the word ya know??
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know, girl, I know.
    This was powerful.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow. peace
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Serenti,

    This is a powerful read. Great flow!!

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl tyte i sho nuff feel ya
    it's one of da worse at dat !
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the absolute worse. never goes away either. you get over it, but always with you. LOVELY SCRIBE....REALNESS!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes....im all too familar with this one here :( :sigh: damnit it dont go away!!!!! tyte flow :)
     
  9. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the responses
     
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    what ms. serenti back on da scene...lol
    i must have missed dis one
    it was truely heartfelt...
    nice ta see ya back in da house
    peace
    khasm
     
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